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Re: Fa-Q - I'll Fight Through Feat Yahhah

Postby Fa-Q » Oct 5th, '09, 16:47

And btw people we got another collab on the way
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Re: Fa-Q - I'll Fight Through Feat Yahhah

Postby classthe_king » Oct 5th, '09, 22:56

Dang both of you went hard on this. I actually liked the chorus, add a couple words here and there to make it sound right and itd be perfect. Fa-q you had some pretty good multis and some pretty good lines. Always like your shit. Yahhah, the best piece from you so far in my opinon. You really brought it, i liked that first bar alot. Ive decieded that your structure and flow are perfect you just don't know how to line it up right. But its still dope keep it up
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Re: Fa-Q - I'll Fight Through Feat Yahhah

Postby Yah-hah » Oct 5th, '09, 23:39

classthe_king wrote:Dang both of you went hard on this. I actually liked the chorus, add a couple words here and there to make it sound right and itd be perfect. Fa-q you had some pretty good multis and some pretty good lines. Always like your shit. Yahhah, the best piece from you so far in my opinon. You really brought it, i liked that first bar alot. Ive decieded that your structure and flow are perfect you just don't know how to line it up right. But its still dope keep it up


Awe class you gonna get me all emotional :P thanks :b: homie
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Fa-Q - I'll Fight Through Feat Yahhah

Postby Fa-Q » Oct 6th, '09, 02:15

Wow thanks Class...hey and if you think I should change anything like you said a word here or there, tell me...I love suggestions cause sometimes that perfects a song
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Re: Fa-Q - I'll Fight Through Feat Yahhah

Postby eminemgirl1234 » Oct 8th, '09, 20:42

Niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiice, I'm gonna read it again...and again. Propz, you guys propz! :y: :flower: :y: :y: :flower: :y: :flower: :y: :y: :flower: :worship: :worship:
"Sometimes I feel so alone,
I just don't know, feels like I been down this road before.
So lonely and cold, it's like something takes over me,
soon as I go home and close the door.
Kinda feels like Déjà Vu, I wanna get away from this place I do,
but I can't and I wont say I tried but I know that's a lie cuz I don't,
and why I just don't know...

Malina a.k.a Mickey

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Re: Fa-Q - I'll Fight Through Feat Yahhah

Postby Yah-hah » Oct 8th, '09, 20:57

eminemgirl1234 wrote:Niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiice, I'm gonna read it again...and again. Propz, you guys propz! :y: :flower: :y: :y: :flower: :y: :flower: :y: :y: :flower: :worship: :worship:


Thanks ma :smoking: :p
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Fa-Q - I'll Fight Through Feat Yahhah

Postby Yah-hah » Oct 9th, '09, 15:16

eminemgirl1234 wrote:Niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiice, I'm gonna read it again...and again. Propz, you guys propz! :y: :flower: :y: :y: :flower: :y: :flower: :y: :y: :flower: :worship: :worship:


Aint nothin wrong with gettin a little carried away with the smilies :whistle:
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Fa-Q - I'll Fight Through Feat Yahhah

Postby Yah-hah » Feb 18th, '10, 11:16

Wow this is kinda fly, I forgot all about this
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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