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Yahhah - I Hear Them Calling (feat Fa-Q)

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Yahhah - I Hear Them Calling (feat Fa-Q)

Postby Fa-Q » Oct 9th, '09, 02:33

Beat used -- http://usershare.net/pwucuoh6dk0u


(YahHah)
I feel feeble and broken,
I'm a zombie that's evil and hopeless,
People keep chokin cause I'm lethal with no skin,
Reaper's still needing a rope then my body's seen decomposin,
My body knee-deep in rose stems to see how this pyro's gifted,
My addictions get mixed in with these hieroglyphics,
My head's heavy like wearin a fine-stone fitted,
They bought me a cheap casket so my spine won't fit in,
My rhymes won't fit aswell my lines have trippled sales,
The sick shit I spit'll make your spine brittle, frail,
My missles' shell flies and whistles well,
Blind crippled hell they can find sickle cell in your minds rippled shell,
I have a quarterbacks courage and this interception hurts,
Complete fire I'ma 60 second Smith and Wesson burst,
I run forever to the end of Earth until my tube sicks break,
I live a boondock saint destined to feel Tupac's fate,
DO NOT WAIT, get caught relaxin when the whistle blows,
Ribs crack and snap from the impact of the initail blow,



(Fa-Q)
I hear them calling,
And I fear I'm falling,
Into the lake of fire,
So tell me, what makes a liar,
Is it me, that chooses to change from the norm that's gloom,
Or is it my evil twin, that watches girls in their dorm room,
I will never preform groom,
My minds in a state,
That wonder if it'll ever find a mate,
I see them chasing me, and they're relentless,
I don't care if my sentence, is too long,
I grew strong, so now I know I can never do wrong,
The clues gone, like different shades of blues in the dawn,
the sun comes up, and will outshine,
Like we do, so my verse don't doubt his, don't doubt mine,
I'm about to find, the key, hide it under the tile floors,
Were like lions with mild roars,
My style soars, over the competition,
And if you think not, your soldiers, in denial of wars,
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Re: Yahhah - I Hear Them Calling (feat Fa-Q)

Postby gutawafang » Oct 9th, '09, 02:36

Pretty fine flow. Loved the multis. :y: :y: :y:

Keep it up homie. Keep it coming. :worship:
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Re: Yahhah - I Hear Them Calling (feat Fa-Q)

Postby Yah-hah » Oct 9th, '09, 02:44

Ha I mean to say "tube socks break" hahaha yeah I like how it turned out
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Yahhah - I Hear Them Calling (feat Fa-Q)

Postby Fa-Q » Oct 9th, '09, 04:25

i dont know about you Just but that beat is fuckin sick
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Re: Yahhah - I Hear Them Calling (feat Fa-Q)

Postby Fa-Q » Oct 9th, '09, 18:43

lol Just i rereadin your verse.....i pretty sure yours is better
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Re: Yahhah - I Hear Them Calling (feat Fa-Q)

Postby DƎRDYPK » Oct 9th, '09, 18:46

wow you guys killed it :worship:
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Re: Yahhah - I Hear Them Calling (feat Fa-Q)

Postby Fa-Q » Oct 9th, '09, 18:54

thanks derdy :)
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Re: Yahhah - I Hear Them Calling (feat Fa-Q)

Postby eminemgirl1234 » Oct 9th, '09, 22:37

propz! you guys propz! :worship: :worship: :worship: :worship: :y:
"Sometimes I feel so alone,
I just don't know, feels like I been down this road before.
So lonely and cold, it's like something takes over me,
soon as I go home and close the door.
Kinda feels like Déjà Vu, I wanna get away from this place I do,
but I can't and I wont say I tried but I know that's a lie cuz I don't,
and why I just don't know...

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Re: Yahhah - I Hear Them Calling (feat Fa-Q)

Postby Yah-hah » Oct 9th, '09, 22:54

eminemgirl1234 wrote:propz! you guys propz! :worship: :worship: :worship: :worship: :y:


Thanks ma :P
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Yahhah - I Hear Them Calling (feat Fa-Q)

Postby Fa-Q » Oct 10th, '09, 04:02

Yah-hah wrote:
eminemgirl1234 wrote:propz! you guys propz! :worship: :worship: :worship: :worship: :y:


Thanks ma :P

Thanks chicha...
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Re: Yahhah - I Hear Them Calling (feat Fa-Q)

Postby BILI » Oct 10th, '09, 23:37

Guys you did great jog,it was really good,especially flow,dope stuff
If you wanna return feed
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Re: Yahhah - I Hear Them Calling (feat Fa-Q)

Postby Fa-Q » Oct 11th, '09, 03:33

Thanks BILI
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