is there (please answer)

[Dnvl]

any mistake in using past simple, past perfect, etc. tense?
I don't know where to ask this so i ask you
hope you will help me

Did you hear what happened to me last month? I was going to Spain on business at that time.
After i had taken my bags out of the car, i realized that i forgot my passport at home. I found a phone and telephoned home in hope that my wife hadn't gone for work yet.A minute passed but nobody had answered. I thought she wasn't at home at the moment. She had already gone. Then I thought that my wife might be in the bathroom. When some seconds passed my wife had answered. I was right she was taking a shower while I was telephoning. She quickly jumped in her car and brought me my passport to the airport. She had arrived just in time.

please help
don't pass by

[Yah-hah]

I'm kinda confused on what this is supposed to mean
explain?

[Dnvl]

please correct if there are mistakes in using English verb tenses

[classthe_king]

I would say no, its good. Im assuming this is for school so the weird little mistakes won't matter.

[Dnvl]

what are the weird little mistakes???
it's very important for me !!!!
why don't you point at them ?

[classthe_king]

just that, i pretty sure telephoning isnt a word.

[Dnvl]

just that, i pretty sure telephoning isnt a word.

it's not my text
it's an exercise in the textbook
but what about tenses????

[classthe_king]

everything was fine with the tenses.

[Dnvl]