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Where Ive Been

Postby Spyder » Oct 10th, '09, 04:23

felt like the new people here havent seen anything from me so i had to give sumin for em
this is a verse ima be putting on my album, this isnt the name i just didnt know what to call it


Its no fabrication when I jump on stage n’, collapse the nation
Rap past amazin, so get your ass ready for this mass invasion.
If that’s the case then, why speak my name in vein when rappin
I cause pain with actions, circus disaster, im the main attraction.
Great in fact son, why be at the top its hard to battle alone
Lyrics rattle your dome, isnt it cold down in the catacombs?
I compressed this depression fuckin just taught it a lesson
Got you guessin, amazin rampagin like a monster was let it.
And im bettin I got all you watchin me, being made a mockery
Forced you to digest these biceps, got charged for armed robbery.
Theres no stoppin me obviously everything you done I did it on
Ive been and gone, makin your dawgs run like the Iditarod.
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Re: Where Ive Been

Postby Spyder » Oct 10th, '09, 16:35

bump :whistle:
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Re: Where Ive Been

Postby classthe_king » Oct 10th, '09, 17:58

Damn no replies on this :( None of the new people really do know you

Anyways, wow this verse was great :worship: Can't wait to hear you rap it and see how your delivery and flow has improved :worship:
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Where Ive Been

Postby Spyder » Oct 10th, '09, 18:25

thanks man :y:
i tried not to - - - my multies and worked on my interenals :D
i love this peice actually so fuck everyone for readin but not commenting :tounge2:
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Re: Where Ive Been

Postby classthe_king » Oct 10th, '09, 18:49

Spyder wrote:i tried not to - - - my multies and worked on my interenals :D


lol what, but yeah, this was a great verse.
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Where Ive Been

Postby Spyder » Oct 10th, '09, 22:11

this is what i didnt do

Spyder wrote:Its no fabrication when I jump on stage-n’, collapse-the-nation
Rap-past-amazin, so get your ass ready for this mass-invasion.
If that’s-the-case-then,


ya know lol
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Re: Where Ive Been

Postby Spyder » Oct 11th, '09, 15:47

bump for feed, i feed your shit :angry:
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Re: Where Ive Been

Postby Drama Setter » Oct 11th, '09, 15:50

good verse yo got there bro :y:
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Re: Where Ive Been

Postby Spyder » Oct 11th, '09, 16:16

thanks drama
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Re: Where Ive Been

Postby BILI » Oct 11th, '09, 19:40

I like it man,it was really good,some dope rhymes,and flow was pretty good 2 :flower:
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Re: Where Ive Been

Postby DƎRDYPK » Oct 11th, '09, 19:43

Hell yeah :worship:
nobody should be sleeping on Spyder :y:
Mainers like us always dropping that wicked shit :smoking:
nice drop homie :8)
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Re: Where Ive Been

Postby Spyder » Oct 11th, '09, 21:09

fuckin right Maine ftw
thanks PK and BILI :b:
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Re: Where Ive Been

Postby Yah-hah » Oct 11th, '09, 21:42

New kids :whistle: dont know why they sleepin bro. That was nice man good multi and internally sounded ridiculous. Keep rockin they heads off
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


Nundea Mekeze comin soon May 4th
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Re: Where Ive Been

Postby Spyder » Oct 11th, '09, 21:44

thanks man
ive been peekin your shit too ive just been busy to feed.
i gotta say ur the best newcomer tho :y:
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Re: Where Ive Been

Postby Yah-hah » Oct 11th, '09, 21:48

Spyder wrote:thanks man
ive been peekin your shit too ive just been busy to feed.
i gotta say ur the best newcomer tho :y:


Awe thanks man. I'm just tryin to stay humble and get my voice out ya know. Appreciate it though big homie thanks for lookin out. Now keep droppin that heat playa :smoking:
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


Nundea Mekeze comin soon May 4th
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