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Real Quick 16

Postby Solace » Oct 11th, '09, 01:32

Been lyching the innocent, ripping the sin-less kids,
Killing the bitches with inches of torture instruments,
Spitting acid, to the wackest devestatingly reactive,
Massive tactic actions so all haters be asskicked,
Why they attempt rapping, wack shit sound like static,
Just imagine when they ain't worthy of a hasbeen,
How they never made it career burns like matches,
I can't understand the way they spit like Bin Laden,
How whack they are when I hit 'em with a bat too hard,
First they act too hard then they start actin' scarred?
Rip rectums in several sectors in less than seven seconds,
Severed record, y'all stay awake cause I'm never resting,
It's not a threat, so how much more honest could I get,
When I promse ya demise, I bet you in a lotta debt,
Attract a vibe, my raps are tight while my action wise,
Snapping tight magic rhymes known like the Jackson 5.
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Re: Real Quick 16

Postby Yah-hah » Oct 11th, '09, 21:38

WOAH sick homie. Nice little drop. "Rip rectums in several sectors in less than seven seconds,
Severed record, y'all stay awake cause I'm never resting,"
Crazy fool. Stay steady
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Real Quick 16

Postby Solace » Oct 12th, '09, 02:23

Thanks Yah Hah :worship:
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