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Gettin back

Postby BILI » Oct 10th, '09, 23:00

This is my first attempt to come out of this writers block
I`m fightin it,like I`m fightin for my life,like fighters in Iraq
Just tryin to stay alive,put out some fuckin dope rhymes
Trying to get on my feet,and spit like in good old times
Been wondering if I`ll ever get back,or I`ll stay whack
People been mocking me lately,but its time for pay back
I`m again in a saddle and riding same old horse
Me and this rap game are back together after our first divorce

any feed plz,I`ve been in some shit wit my rhymes lately so what you guys think???
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Re: Gettin back

Postby Fa-Q » Oct 11th, '09, 03:37

Pretty short but still dope nonetheless....I'd like to see a full track....keep it up Goat
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Re: Gettin back

Postby Solace » Oct 11th, '09, 04:27

Keep at it Bili, nice multies here and there just keep pracitcing those :y:
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Re: Gettin back

Postby BILI » Oct 11th, '09, 11:43

Thx guys,I`m glad you liked it since I`ve been in some shit wit my rhymes lately :flower:
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Re: Gettin back

Postby gutawafang » Oct 11th, '09, 11:51

Been wondering if I`ll ever get back,or I`ll stay whack
People been mocking me lately,but its time for pay back :worship:

I'm so fucking glad you back homie. :smoking:
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Re: Gettin back

Postby BILI » Oct 11th, '09, 19:28

gutawafang wrote:Been wondering if I`ll ever get back,or I`ll stay whack
People been mocking me lately,but its time for pay back :worship:

I'm so fucking glad you back homie. :smoking:

Thx bro
I`m glad I`m back ;)
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Re: Gettin back

Postby DƎRDYPK » Oct 11th, '09, 19:35

hell yeah bro that was dope stay at it :y: ;)
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Re: Gettin back

Postby BILI » Oct 11th, '09, 23:21

DerdyPK wrote:hell yeah bro that was dope stay at it :y: ;)

thx man
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Re: Gettin back

Postby MCyobi » Oct 18th, '09, 13:45

This is fuckin great,I like it :worship:
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Re: Gettin back

Postby BILI » Oct 19th, '09, 18:59

MCyobi wrote:This is fuckin great,I like it :worship:

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Re: Gettin back

Postby shabbymind » Oct 19th, '09, 19:26

BILI wrote:This is my first attempt to come out of this writers block
I`m fightin it,like I`m fightin for my life,like fighters in Iraq
Just tryin to stay alive,put out some fuckin dope rhymes
Trying to get on my feet,and spit like in good old times
Been wondering if I`ll ever get back,or I`ll stay whack
People been mocking me lately,but its time for pay back
I`m again in a saddle and riding same old horse
Me and this rap game are back together after our first divorce

any feed plz,I`ve been in some shit wit my rhymes lately so what you guys think???



Was good straight from the heart... could be better tho


Darkened mind from my darker time
ive been trough alot of things but im still alive
Im gasping my lunges are pierced off despair
So little i have understand why im pissed off to share
All my life i was taught life is unfair
Gettorized mind im thinkin why should i care
i dont breath for my dreams, no life esteem
walkin without the pain that could be,
ignoring everything in life i should see
persuaded my place is not here
20 years of living all full of tears
If you can put out drama this near
i feel sorry and im being sincere
this is just a daily chorus running my head
Standing on the corner almost hoping to get filled up with lead
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