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Racism N.E.W Back Again

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Racism N.E.W Back Again

Postby Slim Zaddy » Oct 10th, '09, 11:28

Each day we face problems, each day there's a new sin,
Each day we learn to hate the world that we live in.
Each day there's more hate, more crimes that we have to face,
And even in 2007...crimes about race.
Crimes about the place that you grew up in or reside,
Threats that divide...rivers that are cried.
But not all is negative, not everything seems bad,
At least we have people willing to go through rehab.
Those that have needed help for so long, admitted they're wrong,
Willing to look aside and again become strong.
But sadly when they do, the people make them drown,
Pound them to the ground, run them out of town.
Like Britney's recent performance, the V.M.A's were worldwide,
Her performance was dry, and in the end she just cried.
She started off a different person, her eyes were starry,
And ended with a slight "Thank You," that was more like a "Sorry."
She knew that she did bad, she cried in a rage,
But the people cared more that she almost tripped walking offstage.
Her mind is in a mesh, she can't help but linger,
But instead of being supportive, the people point the finger...
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Here's a Thought:

Forced to hide in her sweater, and read hateful letters,
How can you expect her to better when the world doesn't let her?
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Fifty-three years since the Jim Crow laws were buried in the sticks,
But still we have occurrences like those with the Jena 6.
Black and white are opposites, it's a known fact,
But by now we've grown to learn that opposites should attract.
So let's retract, and think, before we convict them,
About the example that we're setting...for our children.
They go to school and are exposed to all types of nationalities,
Yet they treat people the way that they're treated by their families.
So if you perform racist acts, racial rants, through and through,
How can you be surprised when your child does it too?
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The world is full of lie and deceit, it all starts at birth,
Yet it's funny how global warming is normal to the earth.
NASA recently fixed a Y2K bug, several plans have been wrecked,
Hottest day of the year is now 1934, their data was incorrect.
So it turns out that this battle isn't much of an assault,
But for years we've been told that the earth's condition is our fault.
Everyone looks to blame someone else, the accusations are unfurled,
But we have no one to blame, for we're all Shapers of the World.


feedback is appreciated ,,
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Re: Racism N.E.W Back Again

Postby classthe_king » Oct 10th, '09, 17:59

Dang, this was some good shit :'( Everything you wrote was true
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Racism N.E.W Back Again

Postby Spyder » Oct 11th, '09, 04:21

your alive :o
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Re: Racism N.E.W Back Again

Postby Slim Zaddy » Oct 11th, '09, 10:34

classthe_king wrote:Dang, this was some good shit :'( Everything you wrote was true


thanks my bro ,, :y:

Spyder wrote:your alive :o


who said i'm dead,,, spyder :'(
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Re: Racism N.E.W Back Again

Postby Fa-Q » Oct 11th, '09, 10:38

Dude that was inspiring as hell...foreal I felt good and bad after that....that would be a good audio....good work zaddy
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Re: Racism N.E.W Back Again

Postby Spyder » Oct 11th, '09, 15:46

lol youve been gone fora bit
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Re: Racism N.E.W Back Again

Postby Drama Setter » Oct 11th, '09, 16:11

Damn emotional :'(
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Re: Racism N.E.W Back Again

Postby Yah-hah » Oct 11th, '09, 21:56

Speak that truth homie :8)
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Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
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Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Racism N.E.W Back Again

Postby Slim Zaddy » Oct 14th, '09, 16:29

thanks all brothers ,, happy you liked it :worship: :worship:
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