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Tired Feat. Coleon, McZu, and Class

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Re: Tired Feat. Coleon, McZu, and Class

Postby Spyder » Oct 6th, '09, 21:34

crazy collab guys, briingin back CW hopefully
weve had u three Solace and Anon reppin it, J Roc is coming back but damn yaknow

i love how class's verse isnt bolded :shifty:
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Re: Tired Feat. Coleon, McZu, and Class

Postby mcZu » Oct 6th, '09, 21:40

Finally, lol.

Dope collab Cole and Class, we killed it.

Thanks for the feed Spyder, appreciate it.

And Cole, how come the chorus is twice? On the end of my verse and again labeled as ''chorus.''
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Re: Tired Feat. Coleon, McZu, and Class

Postby classthe_king » Oct 6th, '09, 23:18

wow, i kinda forgot about this :sweating:
Everyone did a great job.
Thanks spyder :worship:
and thats for all the feed everyone else :unsure:
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Re: Tired Feat. Coleon, McZu, and Class

Postby Yah-hah » Oct 7th, '09, 05:16

Pretty dope man not gonna lie. 3 heavyweights man well sorta :tounge2: naw just messin
Zu verse is sick as usual. diggin the tony hawk line and such was nice
Class was nice man good word usage and all that. Relevant to the topic too. thats always a plus :p
Coleon didn't come as hard as usual but aint mess it up though. Yall keep doin ya thing :b: :b: :b:
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Re: Tired Feat. Coleon, McZu, and Class

Postby classthe_king » Oct 10th, '09, 19:56

Thanks Yah-hah :worship: , anyone else

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Re: Tired Feat. Coleon, McZu, and Class

Postby Solace » Oct 11th, '09, 04:30

That was real dope guys! But i dont get how its Coleon (feat. coleon mc zu and class) ??

Keep posting bros.. :y:
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Re: Tired Feat. Coleon, McZu, and Class

Postby gutawafang » Oct 11th, '09, 11:31

Oh wow. :worship:
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Re: Tired Feat. Coleon, McZu, and Class

Postby Drama Setter » Oct 11th, '09, 15:58

dope shit , keep it up :worship:
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Re: Tired Feat. Coleon, McZu, and Class

Postby mcZu » Oct 13th, '09, 19:07

Thanks for the feed y'all :b:
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