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Postby BILI » Oct 11th, '09, 21:53

I was just fuckin around wit this one

See man its was just a normal day, I was surffing on the internet
Went on YouTube,wrote Eminem,"oh there`s a new video called 3AM"
I just hit play and lay back,song was bad,but wit video it aint that whack
After Em finished his first verse,something happend to my brain
I felt rage inside me,and I was like "Wtf is this I just cant explain
it",and then I heared voice in my head sayin"BILI just calm down"
I`m shakin,but voice said"Dont worry,I`m here now,and I`m bout to stick around"
After Ems secon verse I looked in a mirror and saw devil behind me
I even felt him inside me,it felt like we were Bonnie and Clyde G
Em spits his 3rd verse,fuckin fire pops out of my fuckin eyes
I wasnt even surprised,I just wanted to get out of house undisguised
I went out,everything was dark,people runnin on the streets,all lookin like me
SHIT
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Re: Devil

Postby Yah-hah » Oct 11th, '09, 21:54

BILI wrote:I was just fuckin around wit this one

See man its was just a normal day, I was surffing on the internet
Went on YouTube,wrote Eminem,"oh there`s a new video called 3AM"
I just hit play and lay back,song was bad,but wit video it aint that whack
After Em finished his first verse,something happend to my brain
I felt rage inside me,and I was like "Wtf is this I just cant explain
it",and then I heared voice in my head sayin"BILI just calm down"
I`m shakin,but voice said"Dont worry,I`m here now,and I`m bout to stick around"
After Ems secon verse I looked in a mirror and saw devil behind me
I even felt him inside me,it felt like we were Bonnie and Clyde G
Em spits his 3rd verse,fuckin fire pops out of my fuckin eyes
I wasnt even surprised,I just wanted to get out of house undisguised
I went out,everything was dark,people runnin on the streets,all lookin like me
SHIT


woah you went on some crazy stuff huh. It was ill man dig the crazy stuff nice
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Devil

Postby BILI » Oct 11th, '09, 21:56

Yah-hah wrote:
BILI wrote:I was just fuckin around wit this one

See man its was just a normal day, I was surffing on the internet
Went on YouTube,wrote Eminem,"oh there`s a new video called 3AM"
I just hit play and lay back,song was bad,but wit video it aint that whack
After Em finished his first verse,something happend to my brain
I felt rage inside me,and I was like "Wtf is this I just cant explain
it",and then I heared voice in my head sayin"BILI just calm down"
I`m shakin,but voice said"Dont worry,I`m here now,and I`m bout to stick around"
After Ems secon verse I looked in a mirror and saw devil behind me
I even felt him inside me,it felt like we were Bonnie and Clyde G
Em spits his 3rd verse,fuckin fire pops out of my fuckin eyes
I wasnt even surprised,I just wanted to get out of house undisguised
I went out,everything was dark,people runnin on the streets,all lookin like me
SHIT


woah you went on some crazy stuff huh. It was ill man dig the crazy stuff nice

Thx a lot man :flower:
Was listening to My Darling and I was like wtf I can make some shit like this ;)
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Re: Devil

Postby Yah-hah » Oct 11th, '09, 21:57

BILI wrote:
Yah-hah wrote:
BILI wrote:I was just fuckin around wit this one

See man its was just a normal day, I was surffing on the internet
Went on YouTube,wrote Eminem,"oh there`s a new video called 3AM"
I just hit play and lay back,song was bad,but wit video it aint that whack
After Em finished his first verse,something happend to my brain
I felt rage inside me,and I was like "Wtf is this I just cant explain
it",and then I heared voice in my head sayin"BILI just calm down"
I`m shakin,but voice said"Dont worry,I`m here now,and I`m bout to stick around"
After Ems secon verse I looked in a mirror and saw devil behind me
I even felt him inside me,it felt like we were Bonnie and Clyde G
Em spits his 3rd verse,fuckin fire pops out of my fuckin eyes
I wasnt even surprised,I just wanted to get out of house undisguised
I went out,everything was dark,people runnin on the streets,all lookin like me
SHIT


woah you went on some crazy stuff huh. It was ill man dig the crazy stuff nice

Thx a lot man :flower:
Was listening to My Darling and I was like wtf I can make some shit like this ;)


hahahahah I feel ya
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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