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Till Apocalypse

Postby Requiem » Sep 30th, '09, 06:16

its been awhile.... and i'm planning to record this, let me know what u think :flower:


updated with audio!!!!
http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?t=69226

Verse 1

Patience is a virtue, anxiety’s a plague,
I can’t see straight cuz the world is so vague.
Searching for a light, we look up to a higher power,
But the only time we see Him is in the world’s final hour.
Critical debility of natural ability,
How can one function in this world of negativity.
Every possibility I use my agility,
And avoid hostility, that’s nobility.
So chivalrous, who will deliver us?
From this ignorance, malevolent belligerence.
Is it only through repentance that we gain admittance?
Or in the court of God is everyone defendants?
Will the world end, are we slated for destruction?
Will the ozone disappear from forest deconstruction?
Will fire rain down from volcanic eruptions?
Will the world turn to greed from govt. corruption?
I’m truly seekin answers, I aint searchin for pity.
If I wanted some of that , I wouldn’t be standin here spitting,
I’m admitting, the term Requiem’s now kinda fitting,
But it’s Stereo-Type, and if the world’s ending….


Chorus


Till I breathe my very last breath,
Till my heart gives out and I succumb to death.
If all that’s left in the world is a mic,
I’ll grip it tight, and rhyme through the night.
Till fire rains down from the sky on metropolis,
I’ll keep rhyming throughout the apocalypse.
If the words on my lips are all that I got,
One shot, I’ll spit till my heartbeat stops.


Verse 2

I can see the world crumbling, the kingdom has come,
I can hear the drums, but I don’t dare run.
I stand there stunned, my blood’s gone numb.
The sound of the guns, look at what we’ve done
Our very foundation, our own vitality
Has become our enemy, so has morality.
Realization of our human mortality,
Has led us into this truant mentality.
and I aint gonna stand for no passive aggressive,
fake hidden general subliminal message.
Some have a fetish for the world’s last visage,
But I’d rather die than live to see the image.
People are pessimistic like they hide out in shells,
Patiently waiting for the year 2012.
Let me tackle this touchy subject in which I’m about to delve,
If they don’t believe in a twenty thirteen then let them rot in hell.
I’ve said it once before, don’t make me repeat myself,
I’d rather die trying than live to see us fail.
The final gale, a fiery veil, how can we prevail?
If only we learned to respect ourselves, and not leave the world so frail.




btw, that track i said i had recorded is almoooost done being mixed, so i should have it up soon :smoking:
Last edited by Requiem on Oct 11th, '09, 06:02, edited 2 times in total.
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Re: Till Apocalypse

Postby Requiem » Sep 30th, '09, 17:24

my bad, the gap was my Word fuckin up. LOL

and believe it or not that's what i wanted to do, spit it with anger (2nd verse)....
and thx for the feedback guys :)
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Re: Till Apocalypse

Postby Arabian Shady » Sep 30th, '09, 19:57

oh fuck! that was amazing homie, the first verse was lyrical destruction, the message..the meaning..flow..blow me away :o
Chorus was one of the best i've read man, straight up, i usually cannot find flow to a chorus but what your wrote was just perfect
2nd verse brought the house down, like i read it and was simply spechless-i aint lyin, when the audio comes out i'm make sure i listen to that shit :worship:
Sick shit
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Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
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Re: Till Apocalypse

Postby Requiem » Sep 30th, '09, 21:15

Arabian Shady wrote:oh fuck! that was amazing homie, the first verse was lyrical destruction, the message..the meaning..flow..blow me away :o
Chorus was one of the best i've read man, straight up, i usually cannot find flow to a chorus but what your wrote was just perfect
2nd verse brought the house down, like i read it and was simply spechless-i aint lyin, when the audio comes out i'm make sure i listen to that shit :worship:
Sick shit
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thx man :worship:

checkin urs now :y:
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Re: Till Apocalypse

Postby classthe_king » Sep 30th, '09, 23:24

Haha dope shit :worship: Flow was mostly perfect, but like Scotty said some parts sounded weird. But the audio will probably clear it up. Can't wait to listen to it.
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Re: Till Apocalypse

Postby Requiem » Oct 11th, '09, 06:05

classthe_king wrote:Haha dope shit :worship: Flow was mostly perfect, but like Scotty said some parts sounded weird. But the audio will probably clear it up. Can't wait to listen to it.



check it!!! updated!!!
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Re: Till Apocalypse

Postby Yah-hah » Oct 11th, '09, 21:59

WOW that was so sick bro. Gotta hear the audio man ridiculous :worship: :worship: :worship:
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Re: Till Apocalypse

Postby Requiem » Oct 11th, '09, 23:07

Yah-hah wrote:WOW that was so sick bro. Gotta hear the audio man ridiculous :worship: :worship: :worship:

thx man :y: and defnly check the audio.. and lemme kno what u think :happy:
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Re: Till Apocalypse

Postby BILI » Oct 11th, '09, 23:20

Its fuckin dope man :worship:
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Re: Till Apocalypse

Postby Requiem » Oct 12th, '09, 02:36

BILI wrote:Its fuckin dope man :worship:

thx alot dude :smoking:
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