Beautiful lies

[Yah-hah]

Such beautiful lies fill all two of my eyes,
Even her sweet touch can supress just a few of my cries,
I do and and I die so I live with my heart unprotected,
Though I was once respected I'm too unperfected,
So now I'm done with guessin because my one perspective,
Is clouded by the fact I'm the only one rejected,
Until the feeling I once wanted makes me sick to my stomach,
So I vomit till my sonnet is as ugly as I want it,
But no on eis around to hear my unheard cries,
I can't watch the sky when the sun seers my sunburnt eyes,
When she gives me that small grin goosebumps crawl in under my flawed skin,
Until my heartrate drops and my temperature keeps fallin,
She grips my beating heart with her warm palm till it melts,
So now I'm left for dead stranded on this page by myself,
I've walked 104 miles of forced smiles,
Until my feet finally grew wings so I can soar wild,
Your supportive smile held me off long enough to not save my aborted child,
My kisses oh so irrelevant my mistress oh so devilish,
You've got a vicegrip on every depth of my soul just for the hell of it,

All these beautiful lies that you wanna try,
Takin all my oxygen till I'm blue in the eyes,
I hiding in the dark yeah I'm using disguise,
I'm new to the skies so I'm true when I fly

Well I wish you would stop saying one day we'll kiss again,
I'm so tired of believing all of this shit again,
Just stop it's killing me I've lost ability,
To ever believe in these possibilities,
My heart beats like guitar strings that break under the force of my fingertips,
Like she's physically effected on her meager lips by my lingered kiss,
I could sing her this but I suppose she wouldn't understand,
My song sings such words only the thunder can,
And I still wonder when all my storms can finally run freely,
Your eyes turn to a new memory the very second that you see me,
So I'm done saying that I'm done saying that I'm done staying,
In this decietful game because it seems I'm the only one playing,
Is it fun training the sky so when it's done raining the shine,
Escaping the mind over 6 grains of time and I'm done wasting mine,
I'm done blaiming time, such regrets are useless,
So what if I threw fit when you decided to choose his blue lips,
How the hell can I do this when you just gave me a we're-through-kiss,
Such bliss that barely seems to escape my grasp,
If you keep holding me back how can I ever escape my past,
So you just stay and break my back until at last I take the mask,
And when it breaks in half will you be fake and laugh or will you make it last

All these beautiful lies that you wanna try,
Takin all my oxygen till I'm blue in the eyes,
I hiding in the dark yeah I'm using disguise,
I'm new to the skies so I'm true when I fly

[Yah-hah]

this is just great writing. you had some really impressive imagery:

Until the feeling I once wanted makes me sick to my stomach,
So I vomit till my sonnet is as ugly as I want it,

Wow! the mental image of this bar is amazing. then you had the idea of a poet being stranded on his own page:

She grips my beating heart with her warm palm till it melts,
So now I'm left for dead stranded on this page by myself,
I've walked 104 miles of forced smiles,
Until my feet finally grew wings so I can soar wild,

You might be under-estimating your own metaphorical ability, Yah. your metaphors are incredible, keep them coming. as for the girl, judging from the piece, she ended things with you. my condolences, man. keep ya head up.

Yo thanks man. I always enjoy it when people really dig my stuff. I appreciate it homie. Yeah I do under-estimate myself sometimes. Yeah it was kinda an old piece originally but got to thinking bout her the other day and re-wrote it. Doin good with my girl though 10 months Good lookin out though homie means alot

[BILI]

Wow man I really dig this,some dope shit right here

My heart beats like guitar strings that break under the force of my fingertips,
Like she's physically effected on her meager lips by my lingered kiss,

[Solace]

Wow Yah-Hah. That was a really dope piece. Seriously, it was captivating, and from the start it didn't bore me. You have great talent with multies, me and you have to collab soon. And you speak really from the heart. I'd be surprised if what you wrote didn't actually happen cause it felt so real. Keep dropping

[Yah-hah]

Wow man I really dig this,some dope shit right here

My heart beats like guitar strings that break under the force of my fingertips,
Like she's physically effected on her meager lips by my lingered kiss,

hahahahaha yeah that was one of them lines I just sat back and was like wow I did that ha good looking out homie

[Yah-hah]

Wow Yah-Hah. That was a really dope piece. Seriously, it was captivating, and from the start it didn't bore me. You have great talent with multies, me and you have to collab soon. And you speak really from the heart. I'd be surprised if what you wrote didn't actually happen cause it felt so real. Keep dropping

Yeah that collab would be sick. PM me some time homie. Yeah all my stuff is based one real stuff that happens to me. Thanks bro

[DƎRDYPK]

love this piece
the words you picked are perfect
the multies are nice & i love the flow you got going
6 hundred & 66 's up on this one bro

[Yah-hah]

love this piece
the words you picked are perfect
the multies are nice & i love the flow you got going
6 hundred & 66 's up on this one bro

Hahahahaha I gotcha homie gooh lookin out