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Keystyle (Practice)

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Keystyle (Practice)

Postby AOBrien09 » Oct 11th, '09, 18:15

am'a let my CW flame burn,
an rain out ill lyric's turn by turn,
out of my brain so look's like it's got a storm comin,
grab sumthin, my thought's buildin don't be dumb an,
try to stay in this place, it's not safe no more,
the problem am the core, knockin drake to the floor,
an other phony rapper's with my skill like mr mather's,
killin these chap's is easier than peelin banna's,
an am going banna's while wrappin these bandana's,
round my head, an sayin cheese for the camera's,
then later seeing the facebook tagged picture's,
wearin do rag's it is, dope an fact this is,
what a like then I'll fuckin do it no matter what you think,
the only thing the matter's is the shit that a bring,
this may seem a little obscene but don't deem,
anything it's just practicing so stop you can assessing,

yes another keystyle cause a just can't seem to write on a certain subject atm :'(
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Re: Keystyle (Practice)

Postby Yah-hah » Oct 11th, '09, 21:51

Yeah one of those kinda random keystyles huh hahah yeah dig it man good lookin out. :b:
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With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
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Re: Keystyle (Practice)

Postby Solace » Oct 12th, '09, 00:15

Yeah keep at it, try improving your multies other than that pretty good :y:
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