Coleon - By Tommorow (If You Ever Feed Me Again, now Please)

[Relapse.LP]

Deep stuff. I really felt the second verse.

The hook could be a little better, but that's just my opinion.

Feedback on mine, please?

(Fuck Love or In the darkness...)

[Noeezy]

nice shit, should end up being a good audio,
the flow was perfect on that beat when i rapped it out

[Yah-hah]

Yeah man I was really feelin the connection with the lyrics and the beat. Ya know everyone has that song you can feel they put alot into it. This is that song man. Keep ya head up homie and stay rockin it

[lilrossy]

nice verses man, it was a good read. flowed nicely and you could feel the emotion. i liked it, keep it up.

[mcZu]

Everything besides the chorus is great, I would say change the chorus, re-phrase it, and it'll be a great piece of art which eventually will turn into an audio gem for ya EP.

[classthe_king]

If i died today, yo tommorow i'd be dead

Lmao at that line.

But for real i loved this. Reminded me of some old vinnie paz type rap. Multis werent there obviously but with this i wouldnt expect them to be. I could catch onto the flow perfect from the begining. I loved the lyrics, and the subject matter. Hope your recording this.