i hate this part
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Re: i hate this part
by Emadyville » Oct 13th, '09, 02:52
you captured that experience and emotion well, very good
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Re: i hate this part
by Yah-hah » Oct 13th, '09, 08:24
Dude you snatched that raw emotion and got it man. Dope little drop man I feel it
"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah
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Re: i hate this part
by RapName » Oct 13th, '09, 09:54
good rhyming and I get the emotion...
you should try a little more difficult rhyming and words though
you should try a little more difficult rhyming and words though
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