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things we do for love. Chapter 1.

Postby emzee-frenzy » Oct 13th, '09, 09:23

it's 10 am. i just woke up next to her... "too bad she's sleeping and i can't stare into her beautiful hazel eyes" i thought. So i crawl out, slowly, quiet, like my life depends on her pleasant sleep.
i stumbled on some ice cream...it was all over the floor along with some clothes and a pack of ciggarettes, so i decide to light one, i don't usually smoke but... it's just what a man does to complete his feeling of "coolness" after a night like that.
Didn't take a shower, i went straight to the kitchen to make some breakfast even tough i wasn't hungry but i could bet she was. I wonder what are her preferences, does she like omlette? If so what kind of omlette, scrambled or simple? Or was she a vegetarian? Why didn't i invite her to dinner yesterday evening, we would of surely conversate about that, maybe because i'm such a lousy talker when it comes to women, i just start a conversation about a subject that is at hand, trying to keep in touch with a real object so i won't have to bore her with my childish thoughts and imagination.
I decide to make her a couple of eggs and some sallad and a glass of natural orange juice, that's what i thought would do the trick.
But than i see that i'm out of bread, every breakfast needs bread, and coffee i just remembered, she told me that she loves coffee and i am out of that too. I quickly put on a pair of baggy jeans and a shirt and almost forgot to strap shoes on my feet, i walked out barefooted and woudn't even know it if it wasn't for that glass on the ground, but that is not of the essence now.
It's 10:30 and i'm finnaly back with the groceries so i start making breakfast quick and almost burned myself with boiling oil, i put everything on a plate and slowly carried it to her room with a proud smile on my face, i open the door "wake up sleepy head", i said. Nothing.
What do you mean...nothing? Nothing. She's not there, okay, where could she be? Maybe she is taking a shower, so i rushed to the bathroom, i forgot that the plate was in my hand and not only that but the floor was wet too, so i slipped, fell and eggs, sallad and orange juice were all over my face, i'm glad that the hot coffee missed. it was 10:45.
So if the floor was wet, that means she took a shower before she left, damn it's my fault, she probably thought i dumped her and gave her the discretion to leave at her will.
I washed my face and looked in the mirror, "i have to find her" i said.
First i looked around the room to see if she left any clues, the pack of ciggarettes was still there, damn i need one now... i think i'm gonna start smoking. I found nothing else but a pencil.
I decide to take them and start the pursuit.
I walk out the door and bend to put the key under the carpet and that's when i see it, a note, the presence of her perfume was all over it. It had only one word, "Gina". She knew i forgot her name, she wants me to find her, I said to myself "that's good for starters".

to be continued...
Last edited by emzee-frenzy on Oct 16th, '09, 15:52, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: things we do for love. Chapter 1.

Postby emzee-frenzy » Oct 13th, '09, 19:52

a little feed would help, it's the first time i'm trying to write like this.
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Re: things we do for love. Chapter 1.

Postby Yah-hah » Oct 13th, '09, 19:56

Yo man you can't be leavin me hangin like that bro :8) I wanna see more dude I gotta know what happens :sweating: :smoking:
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Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
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Re: things we do for love. Chapter 1.

Postby emzee-frenzy » Oct 13th, '09, 19:58

Yah-hah wrote:Yo man you can't be leavin me hangin like that bro :8) I wanna see more dude I gotta know what happens :sweating: :smoking:

Patience my friend, i will work on it. thank's for the feed and stay tuned :worship:
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Re: things we do for love. Chapter 1.

Postby Yah-hah » Oct 13th, '09, 20:00

emzee-frenzy wrote:
Yah-hah wrote:Yo man you can't be leavin me hangin like that bro :8) I wanna see more dude I gotta know what happens :sweating: :smoking:

Patience my friend, i will work on it. thank's for the feed and stay tuned :worship:


NO PATIENCE!!!!!!!!! :zipped:
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: things we do for love. Chapter 1.

Postby emzee-frenzy » Oct 13th, '09, 21:01

Yah-hah wrote:
emzee-frenzy wrote:
Yah-hah wrote:Yo man you can't be leavin me hangin like that bro :8) I wanna see more dude I gotta know what happens :sweating: :smoking:

Patience my friend, i will work on it. thank's for the feed and stay tuned :worship:


NO PATIENCE!!!!!!!!! :zipped:

ok ok , i will sork on it first thing in the morning :sweating:
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