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Re: Coleon - Land Of The Deaf (Future Single)

Postby Yah-hah » Oct 13th, '09, 23:45

WOAH FIRE homie straight dope. You got a really easy to follow flow. Dig it homie wanna see it recorded for sure. Dopeness dude :worship: :worship: And I see the multis homie :whistle:
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Re: Coleon - Land Of The Deaf (Future Single)

Postby classthe_king » Oct 14th, '09, 23:08

tbh, i couldnt find the flow with that beat at all. Lyrics were just ehhh, youve done better. I don't really see this as a single but who knows, when you record it you could pull it off.
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Re: Coleon - Land Of The Deaf (Future Single)

Postby classthe_king » Oct 15th, '09, 02:11

Coleon wrote:
classthe_king wrote:tbh, i couldnt find the flow with that beat at all. Lyrics were just ehhh, youve done better. I don't really see this as a single but who knows, when you record it you could pull it off.


it's fast, really fast flow :y: may help


hmmmmm, i was singing it semi fast, ill try again.
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Re: Coleon - Land Of The Deaf (Future Single)

Postby classthe_king » Oct 15th, '09, 02:18

Lol, i rapped that like twista fast and it went together lol, i dont know if you were talkin about that fast though. And is that from lose yourself in the beat?
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Re: Coleon - Land Of The Deaf (Future Single)

Postby classthe_king » Oct 15th, '09, 02:57

Coleon wrote:
classthe_king wrote:Lol, i rapped that like twista fast and it went together lol, i dont know if you were talkin about that fast though. And is that from lose yourself in the beat?


that's what I thought, sounds like it

and when/if , preferably when I record it i'll show ya, kinda hard to explain how to flow to how I writ it


lol alright, cant wait
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