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Postby gutawafang » Oct 14th, '09, 03:42

A song to remember why I existed, don't get it twisted
Saved me from being blacklisted, from being wasted
You didn't save me once but twice, no, prolly more
It's like you invited me to go through the shiny door
I've disappointed you, disrespected you, ignored you
You still held me up no matter how I am bored of you
I salute you, I thank you, for being so kind to me
Sent me an Angel down, I thanked her for finding me
Everything I've wished for, no matter how casually
They just come true, things appear magically
Things I've wanted, seriously wishes were granted
I'm being self-centered, but you don't seem offended
Why you showering me love? I never asked for it
When I prayed for it, you gave a test for it
I just passed it, not an 'A', but you gave me
All of the bad things I did, you came to save me

I know a few more decades will be the end of me
So I take this time to thank this friend in me
I know Angel Lailoken wasn't sent to me for free
But she's the reason why a human's all I gotta be
I thank you for the blood in me and the oxygen
Thank you for the gills and more reasons
Reasons to stay alive and be a part of the universe
Which you create, and pardon me for my puny verse
But I know words wouldn't be suffcient to appreciate
I know prayers would be enough like how you indicate
I know I should abide you, I know I should ride you
I know I should be truthful, but I still lied to you
Tell me if I deserve to be in your eyesight?
Is it right that I serve you, I should die rite?
I should've been punished by now, by rights
But it's my life I'm living, thanks for giving me my rights

Dear God,
sincerely Fish.
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Re: Thanks

Postby Yah-hah » Oct 14th, '09, 03:46

I like it man nicely done. I love signed fish :p Cool feel man stay rockin :y:
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Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
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Re: Thanks

Postby gutawafang » Oct 14th, '09, 03:55

Yah-hah wrote:I like it man nicely done. I love signed fish :p Cool feel man stay rockin :y:

Arigato. :happy:
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Re: Thanks

Postby FAME » Oct 14th, '09, 04:38

:'( Have me tearing up
Truthfully, all of the stuff I've read, and heard from you is def in your soul. I like that you don't have to change your style for anyone. :y:
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Re: Thanks

Postby gutawafang » Oct 15th, '09, 02:34

FAME wrote::'( Have me tearing up
Truthfully, all of the stuff I've read, and heard from you is def in your soul. I like that you don't have to change your style for anyone. :y:

Thanks so much FAME for your comments. :happy:
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Re: Thanks

Postby Yah-hah » Oct 15th, '09, 02:47

Yo man check out my new one called I come before you. I wrote it after reading this joint man kinda inspired me :p
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Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
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