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Punchline

Postby D'Leh » Oct 14th, '09, 16:56

[Zurditoshady]
If you dont think Im the best, tell me whos better?
Cause all you BOYS get PLAYED like Hugh Hefner!
Im making my own world, invent some new letters
Call me God, I have the ability to choose weather!

[RX]
Be be spittin all day, youd think the skys are grey
No delay, we slay our way to the top like your our prey
Unlike when it rains though, our shit aint depressing
Yall thinkin its blazin heat, hotter as were progressing

[ZURDITOSHADY]
Sick of the stress from being the best, I need therapy
But well be the best forever, never leave, Im only Seventeen
Starting at the top, this young how the fuck is it possible?
Cause like Jack ill roll you down the hill, and the Mic is dropped to Jill..

[RX]
We been dissin people so fucking violently untill we kill/
yall be readin our cyphers an shit thinkin "They got Ill skill"/
Admins warned us about killing oponents, but fuck, we still will/
MCs bitin lines, Ima be writin rhymes to slash throats like on kill bill/

[ZURDITOSHADY]
Were like Obama, so yall are just Hilary
Send our mouths to Iraq like heavy artillery
Always staying strapped, just call us Rambo
Cause we paint them perfect pictures, just like Van Gogh

[RX]
We be reppin the best.. GMN all day with no contest, Not even Astros
We rhymin like were blessed, wearin rhyme proof vests.. Ass holes
Scorin knockouts in the first round like were a bunch of joe fraizors
The way we kill MCs, yall would think the mic is our Light sabor

[ZURDITOSHADY]
So call us the Jedis, have you speaking like Yoda
Dislexic bitches, and this rhyming is never over
But whats the odor? Its the smell of the shit you speak
Hit you with a couple punchlines, a couple missing teeth..

[RX]
So fly, my neighborhood swears im the local batman
Battlers tryna be undefeated, i just ruined that plan
I wouldnt use your lyrics like it was a Gat from japan
Blowing up in your hand, im blowin up the text since my rap days began

[ZURDITOSHADY]
Well youre the batman, and Im the local joker
So many chips, youd think Im always playing poker
Thoughts spinning around like the belt of a motor
And something you should remember, this is NEVER OVER.


this shit is gonna be record tomorrow!!!

thoughts feedback?
Let me eat your pussy while I shave you!
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Re: Punchline

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Oct 14th, '09, 17:10

damn hard shit....thru out the whole thing...nice punchlines indeed :y:
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Re: Punchline

Postby D'Leh » Oct 14th, '09, 17:11

thanks bro!!! :y:
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Re: Punchline

Postby emzee-frenzy » Oct 14th, '09, 20:21

that went hard :y:
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throat slitting bitches in public then start killing witnesses" - emzee
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Re: Punchline

Postby BILI » Oct 14th, '09, 20:42

That was dope bro
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Re: Punchline

Postby classthe_king » Oct 14th, '09, 23:02

You had some good worplay in there but nothing to exciting.
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Punchline

Postby Yah-hah » Oct 14th, '09, 23:04

:boxing: :boxing: :boxing: For days! :y:
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

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Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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