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It's Ro$$y! [verse one]

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It's Ro$$y! [verse one]

Postby lilrossy » Oct 13th, '09, 13:20

raised in the city brizzy, its the silly kid ro$$y kickin ya speakers,
portrayed as a wannabe bias b, but ima gonna be, gota be one of the greatest,
so for all u weepers and haters, im not yet, but set to be one of australias,
finest mc's, cuz since the crusader, not many can flow like me, so scribe, laters,
like the equator, lets draw a line down the middle, im no eminem, so call me skittle,
i gotta riddle, wat burns more, bullet thru the thigh or a guy with an STI tryna piddle,
shiit, im tryna be civil, but be a bitch and ima whittle ya body and bones til they brittle,
so shut up and twiddle ya thumbs and listen, don't belittle me, shit, not even a little,
it'll be the end like b.e.p, cuz the only flow ya got is when ya spend a penny,
with my pad and my pen, ima be real big and fresh like mannie, pockets fatter then jenny,
u cant defend, im dat fuckin bastard dat killed kenny, and pleaded insanity,
dont be mad at me, couple of years u'll be able to see, my cd up in sanity,
not many, if any, motherfuckers would believe, dat ro$$y's gonna succeed,
im just laughin, witha 25 stick of weed, bottle of bundy, and foil of speed,
im fuckin keen, hour later laying like a figurine, tryna breathe, a weekly routine,
off in another world, so when they say im goin nowhere, fucked if i know wat they mean.

a song im workin on, let us no wat ya think.
"Too fatal, unable to crash
Sluts I introduce to anal call me a pain in the ass"
"Got hoes suspicious. Even one peg leg bitches
After I came, fucked em with they own leg
They ain't know the difference"
-Copywrite
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Re: It's Ro$$y! [verse one]

Postby Yah-hah » Oct 13th, '09, 20:02

I could see you rappin mainstream honestly. Don't know how you see your style though :y:
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


Nundea Mekeze comin soon May 4th
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Re: It's Ro$$y! [verse one]

Postby Drama Setter » Oct 13th, '09, 20:12

good job yo
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props to Coleon and DarkBlade
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Re: It's Ro$$y! [verse one]

Postby lilrossy » Oct 14th, '09, 06:49

thanx for da feed guys.
"Too fatal, unable to crash
Sluts I introduce to anal call me a pain in the ass"
"Got hoes suspicious. Even one peg leg bitches
After I came, fucked em with they own leg
They ain't know the difference"
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Re: It's Ro$$y! [verse one]

Postby classthe_king » Oct 14th, '09, 23:03

Try to make your lines shorter, it will help the flow if you wanted to record it :y: Good song though
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: It's Ro$$y! [verse one]

Postby lilrossy » Oct 15th, '09, 08:17

classthe_king wrote:Try to make your lines shorter, it will help the flow if you wanted to record it :y: Good song though


i actually wrote this to a beat i got, so it flows fine, cuz normally i wouldnt write with that size bars. thanx for the feed though. :y:
"Too fatal, unable to crash
Sluts I introduce to anal call me a pain in the ass"
"Got hoes suspicious. Even one peg leg bitches
After I came, fucked em with they own leg
They ain't know the difference"
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