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It's Been A Long Time

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Re: It's Been A Long Time

Postby Spyder » Oct 15th, '09, 01:19

rakim the microphone soloist :shifty:
but i liked it man nice feel to it, flowed nice imo

but i challenge u to write a different track than a love song :shifty:
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Re: It's Been A Long Time

Postby gutawafang » Oct 15th, '09, 01:31

the way your wore your hair, and now i surge the beat
i'm trapped in a cage and you're the bird that's free :worship:

Loved it. :)
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Re: It's Been A Long Time

Postby Yah-hah » Oct 15th, '09, 02:20

Yo that line fish said is really ill. Yeah man dug it. Alotta love songs lately :shifty:
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Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
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