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Poetic Licence: Destroying English: Wrong Vocab

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Poetic Licence: Destroying English: Wrong Vocab

Postby gutawafang » Oct 16th, '09, 03:19

Without punctuations, without vowels
Leave them blank, you laugh till you dispose your bowels
That's how it goes, grammatically wrong, it's over
Then the confession you made seems like you owe her
Funny how people interpret my rhymes, like it's English
I know it is, but I write them lines and everything twists
And then they still think this is Shakespeare-an shit
When I mix verbs like disappear" and split
So now when I speak, I appear and I spit
I occur to be weak but I'm weird in my speed
So who's laughing again? Added a punctuation there
I'm your English teacher who will flunk you, patience wear
Destroying the language with poetic licence
Violence mistreats the silence and you know it, hyphens
Add that to mystical-words, becomes a cyclic-world
Hyphen-ate's the new skill, predicted by a psychic-girl
Sorry I missed the full stops and the commas
But this is hiphop, full of liars, full of llamas
There's no mistaking the dramas
This is hotter than any summers
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Re: Poetic Licence: Destroying English: Wrong Vocab

Postby Emadyville » Oct 16th, '09, 04:40

Some of that seemed to make no sense at all, it started off good then just kinda died
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Re: Poetic Licence: Destroying English: Wrong Vocab

Postby Yah-hah » Oct 16th, '09, 08:16

hahahahaha sounds like someone was writing this instead of paying attention in English class :p
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Re: Poetic Licence: Destroying English: Wrong Vocab

Postby gutawafang » Oct 17th, '09, 03:05

Emadyville wrote:Some of that seemed to make no sense at all, it started off good then just kinda died

Thanks for the feed. Appreciate you checking it out man.

Yah-hah wrote:hahahahaha sounds like someone was writing this instead of paying attention in English class :p

Ha. I'm just too bored. I just thought of my fellow local friends as I wrote this. :p But I guess you right. :D
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