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We made hell (Poem)

Postby gutawafang » Oct 16th, '09, 03:22

The farm of Hell
Came down to Earth
To wish us well
But we aren’t well

The occupants of the home
Fireplace lit up
Not because of cold
But they wants to be cold

My ex-girlfriend wrote this. Tell me what you think. :8)
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Re: We made hell (Poem)

Postby Solace » Oct 18th, '09, 04:40

i didnt really like it much but it had good emotion in just short words
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Re: We made hell (Poem)

Postby gutawafang » Oct 19th, '09, 03:12

thanks for reading guys. :)
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