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We Taking Over

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We Taking Over

Postby Solace » Oct 16th, '09, 03:44

[Intro]
Fuck man with all these new people y'all musta forgotten about us!

[Verse]
Yo I'll mention that I'm not regretting this bombs intentions,
And this is armageddon, this armors getting a lot of tension,
I got depression, but I'll be right picking the wrong decisions,
I'm on a mission, stop the flinching and all ya lots of bitching,
Ripping those million foes to billion pieces, kill and pose,
A million threats, drilling holes into these STD ridden hoes,
Immaculate rap spitting, wack killing, y'all like "How can it be?"
Passionately lyrically packin' heat with more force than gravity,
It's so sad to see when rappers be falling off their mountains,
This is my 17th fall, how long it'll take to climb back I'm countin',
Ya shield is shedding, like erosion and weather to landforms,
I put my lyric sheets on my hands just to keep my hands warm,
5 Stars Generals? We ain't pricks. I'm back on my C game bitch,
And we ain't toning down shit, we darker than C-Game's skin,
Only time you get fourplay is playing Halo 3 on Xbox Live,
I'm a fiend fed off of pitch black night, ready to rest y'all hype.

[Hook]
I play for the team, trained for the dream, the generals,
In general I'm speaking about the illest fuckers to ever flow,
Will they become something, or just rot? You never know,
Don't act surprised when you wanna send us letters though.
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Re: We Taking Over

Postby Yah-hah » Oct 16th, '09, 08:13

I dig it man reppin the old generals. Nice drop Sol
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
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Re: We Taking Over

Postby mcZu » Oct 16th, '09, 17:51

Sol boy tell 'em!

We're gonna take over, bitches!

Nice drop btw Omar, solid in all aspects. Though you could try more wordplay next time.
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Re: We Taking Over

Postby Solace » Oct 17th, '09, 03:57

Thanks both, McZu Ill try workin on that in future pieces. Definitely a very weak aspect of mine.
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Re: We Taking Over

Postby bullet_boy46 » Oct 17th, '09, 04:06

nice shit man :y:
Solace wrote:Oh stop your making me blush :blinking:

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Re: We Taking Over

Postby Solace » Oct 17th, '09, 04:07

bullet_boy46 wrote:nice shit man :y:

Thanks.

And smh you was coco?
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Re: We Taking Over

Postby classthe_king » Oct 17th, '09, 04:29

i like too see this. The only thing i could say is add more wordplay, like zu said, but don't worry im terrible at that too.
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Re: We Taking Over

Postby Spyder » Oct 18th, '09, 00:59

yeah we really are taking over........

expect big things from the generals in the near future.... new news just craaaaazy :shifty:
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Re: We Taking Over

Postby Solace » Oct 18th, '09, 04:37

Thanks all of you for the feedback! :y:
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