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Postby emzee-frenzy » Oct 16th, '09, 08:27

At this point, my thoughts are hitting my skull frenetic trying to get out and my head aches so bad i'm convinced it's gonna just shut down. Still, i look calm almost absent as i walk to the lady at the desk. This place is making my heart a little chilly, the design of the building is gothic and it seemed to be built in the early 19th century, even tough most buildings in Vienna look sort of like this one, being actually inside of one and thinking of sleeping in it could give a New Yorker the creeps.
She looked at me a bit strange, i felt like she was spying me with the back of her eyes and always turned away on time for me to not see her, maybe i look like an alien out here, i never seen this before. all men wear suits and all women wear elegant, no that's not enough, extravagant sober outfits.
I can't go walking around dressed like this i need a suit, i said. So after i gave the hotel boy the tip
i went out to buy one. I don't have a clue how much i gave him, i hate these fuckin euro's, i even hate to pronounce them, and over here it's even worse, they don't just say "euro's" they call them "oero's" or something like that, Europe is a strange place i can tell you that.
I found a nice suit at last, and i kind of like how it goes on me, it gives me a solemn attitude, at least that's what i think. I decide to leave it on me, these things take a massive amount of time to be put on.
I go back to the hotel, enter the room and start thinking...what am i supposed to do now?
I look around the room. why is she playing these games with me? then again, why am i falling for them? All i know is that i feel a great attraction to her, she's special, and i have that kind of feeling you know, when you feel you are exactly at the right place at the right time.
I notice a magazine on the desk, it was a movie theatre's magazine, i go through it and i see something, turn the pages back and i see it again, it was a circle, marker made, the movie name "Komm zu mich jetzt". I check my laptop, it obviously means "come to me now".
I run to the theatre, the movie began five minutes ago, "as usual", i said.
I entered and started watching, it was in german, didn't understand nothing so this means i should be all eyes to see something, my brain is boiling. it was allready the middle of the movie and no clue yet, but then a interesting scene appears, the man sleeps dreaming of the girl, and then i don't know how or why but this beautiful english voice says "to find the treasure in the night, follow on the path of sunlight, and when that light is gone, another will shine bright above the water".
This is it, the clue, i need to get out. As i'm walking out thinking, "path of sunlight" what does that mean? think, think Chriss, you didn't come all this way to fuck it up now. I'm almost out of ideas, i'm tired... i raise my head, where am i? i'm lost in this foreign place with nothing but a riddle.
I look around, i see a street name plate, "Sonne strasse", oh my God, that means Sun street, ok so "follow on the path of sunlight" as in go where the Sun street leads you, thank God.
I'm walking, no, i'm running, i don't really know, i'm waiting to see where this would lead me.
This street is so long,, i feel like it's never ending. I walk for like half an hour and it seems that the street is finaly coming to an end, so is this long day, the sun is slowly going to sleep filling the city with a sweet-sorrow taste, "when the light is gone, another will shine bright above the water", let me think about that, so when this street has ended or when the day has ended, she will be my light above the water, how could she be above the water? i'll just have to wait and see.
At last the street and the day are both over in perfect timing, i'm happy to see that indeed i have indeed reached the lake, ok so it's now or never, i inspect the surroundings.
i look in the way of the sunset with the eyes of an eagle. Oh yes, i see, why didn't i think about it by now? the bridge, that's how she stays above the water.
I start running, don't know if i'm running twoards the light or at the speed of it, maybe both.
it's now offcially night, the bridge is not far away, still i run,light, where is the light? What type of light?
I got close to the bridge, i stop to take a look and fit my suit, then i could say i had the most beautiful feeling a man can have in his life, bliss, there she was, all white, my bride.
I'm getting closer and close...she's smiling.
-It' 8:05, you're five minutes late.
-As usual.
we kissed and stood still some time, i don't know how much, maybe we're still there, that moment captured for all eternity...i haven't found my savior plane, but something much more, another soul floating on a wood board right next to me, till we both sink holding hands into the frozen dark abys.
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Re: things we do for love. Chapter 4.

Postby Yah-hah » Oct 16th, '09, 14:26

YYYYOOOOOOOO!!!!!!! dude i got so into that story man. That was crazy dude for real I don't even know what to say. I knew he was gonna find her I just knew it. Good Good Good stuff homie. Dont know why everyone is sleepin on you. I want to see more stories man I'm lovin these things.
"I start running, don't know if i'm running twoards the light or at the speed of light, maybe both."
Sick line dude. Keep on writing man :worship: :worship: :worship:
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With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
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Re: things we do for love. Chapter 4.

Postby emzee-frenzy » Oct 16th, '09, 15:13

Yah-hah wrote:YYYYOOOOOOOO!!!!!!! dude i got so into that story man. That was crazy dude for real I don't even know what to say. I knew he was gonna find her I just knew it. Good Good Good stuff homie. Dont know why everyone is sleepin on you. I want to see more stories man I'm lovin these things.
"I start running, don't know if i'm running twoards the light or at the speed of light, maybe both."
Sick line dude. Keep on writing man :worship: :worship: :worship:

thank's man for the support, it means a lot and yeah i'm gonna try to write more stories :flower: :smoking:
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Re: things we do for love. Chapter 4.

Postby Yah-hah » Oct 16th, '09, 18:04

emzee-frenzy wrote:
Yah-hah wrote:YYYYOOOOOOOO!!!!!!! dude i got so into that story man. That was crazy dude for real I don't even know what to say. I knew he was gonna find her I just knew it. Good Good Good stuff homie. Dont know why everyone is sleepin on you. I want to see more stories man I'm lovin these things.
"I start running, don't know if i'm running twoards the light or at the speed of light, maybe both."
Sick line dude. Keep on writing man :worship: :worship: :worship:

thank's man for the support, it means a lot and yeah i'm gonna try to write more stories :flower: :smoking:


Lookin forward to it homie
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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