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bar dont need a concept

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Oct 16th, '09, 14:24

i watch how the birds fly my eyes squint slightly
me reaching there heights is now seeming quite likely
i feel so fucking good there's no need to spike me
i just wanne get a beat now producer mic me
let me show scotland how i a rip a beat tightly
its my turn to speak rightly now that i freak nightly
in a couple of years ya'll be chanting my name
n ill be ranting bout fame and how it hasnt changed me
rap aint my mother aint got the right to name me
i make that myself watch me jump from the shelf
im the bearded old bastard never settle for the elf
im the contoction that people put props in
im a full time apointment i aint no drop in
so basically im saying im sturdy, no flopping
i turn round to rap like last night i had ya
15 hours straight no use off viagra
now thats something to be proud off
dont turn the sound off, i got lots to say
got the gift of the gab the way i talk all day
the whole point of the track i to have fun way rhymes
soon to be headlining on the sunday times
see the tracks coming through but on a runaway line
im tryna get to glasgow but edinbrughs all i find
settlings on a time i say ill blow up soon
the only ways to rise up like a heluim baloon
stealing your spoon right out of your mouth
i aint even got silver culterly in my house
so im set up north but i came from the south
call it the african nation im laching impatient
to the mic that im craving call it pregnancy rap
i step on your back balance a broom on my nose
got this rap so locked there's still room for my flows
and its soon coz he knows, how hes doin this shit
outside on a walll with haters on my dick
well it aint really a penis more like a over sized clit
hair on he outer zone and in the shape of a cone
now dont that sound like something you wanne hold
and i cum in about 3 seconds so now youve been told
no need to fuck me, fuck a bannanna, atleast that cant pee
there probably i point to get across so ill try
but if you dont get the metaphor how the fuck should i
ill finish this track while my voice is on check
this just proves, bar dont even need a concept.
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Re: bar dont need a concept

Postby Yah-hah » Oct 16th, '09, 14:32

WOAH dope dope dope dude for real. A bunch of ill lines man. Killed it homie
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

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Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: bar dont need a concept

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Oct 17th, '09, 15:53

thanks man :y:
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