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Lightest Of Work. (Sorry J-Roc, That Phrase Owns) RESPONCE

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Lightest Of Work. (Sorry J-Roc, That Phrase Owns) RESPONCE

Postby MC Anonymous » Oct 17th, '09, 15:23

Scotty on the chorus.

by dissing anonymous, you've committed suicide, fellows
now look at me, and see what i can do with my cello
i'll get you to cry - bellow, with tears and dry yellow
liquid coming out ya ears, soon you will die, mellow
my zooming lines bellow and take you to your suicide memo's

Yah-Hah...

Paragraph Proofs?
What? scared of me too?
Try to rhyme like my style
when you paired with 'lapse dude?
Humble was a mask
made him diss me just to prove it
everything you ever said
from now on is computed
Dropping every single day
but your structure isn't better
break the moon across your face
fuck that girl with all your letters
One dimensional writer,
trying to battle four dimensional figures
I'm a book of knowledge
plus I'm drinking elixir
bullet proof tiger eh?
So if I pull the ''proof'' right away
I'll make you ''fly away?''
Ok, Show you motherfuckers how he rhymes today
there is no ''wings'' on a ''tiger'',
why you lie in ways?
Now his ''steel armor'' is broken
his ''karma awoken''
so ''everything he said came back''
before these words are spoken
and that's just ''common sense''
fuck you, I was ''honest, cent''
by God to bomb your tent
You a ''boxer'' that really can't ''pacifist''
deadly, trying to go ''rounds'' with an activist

by dissing anonymous, you've committed suicide, fellows
now look at me, and see what i can do with my cello
i'll get you to cry - bellow, with tears and dry yellow
liquid coming out ya ears, soon you will die, mellow
my zooming lines bellow and take you to your suicide memo's

Relapse...

You try to, to hard, being a master of words
I'll shatter your verbs
and kill you with vernacular, herb
When the battle counted, you lost and I won
so you diss me? You pissy?
Now you must taste my gun

''The final massacre like a tidal massive surge... your spinal has to hurt/
A vaginal ass to burn... Anon ashamed of not being the Creative Writer/....?'' ..Huh?


Your ideas don't make cents,
like Sac's magnetic rings
a pathetic scheme,
trying to rhyme aesthetically
writing stories in a girl's point of view
but this point is true
you got a rainbow avatar
with a spoiled crew
and you just named the diss,
''Long Kiss Goodnight''
Are you a faggot in the closet?
Are you alright?
I'll hop offense like Mexicans
and my text will spin
both your necks again,
have you fucked with straps like lesbians
How you gonna try to ''fuck''
with the riddle genius
when the L.P. In your name
stands for ''little penis?''
Your name is based off Eminem
yet you calling people stans?
That's just evil man
a hypocrite that's rhyming really bland
with energy,
I'm spinning blades like ceiling fans
so I can fuck you up,
defy gravity, such an easy plan

by dissing anonymous, you've committed suicide, fellows
now look at me, and see what i can do with my cello
i'll get you to cry - bellow, with tears and dry yellow
liquid coming out ya ears, soon you will die, mellow
my zooming lines bellow and take you to your suicide memo's
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Lightest Of Work. (Sorry J-Roc, That Phrase Owns) RESPONCE

Postby BILI » Oct 17th, '09, 15:32

It was dope,flowed awesome,I like the hook alot
just :o
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Re: Lightest Of Work. (Sorry J-Roc, That Phrase Owns) RESPONCE

Postby Tranquil » Oct 17th, '09, 16:02

Loved it :worship:
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Re: Lightest Of Work. (Sorry J-Roc, That Phrase Owns) RESPONCE

Postby Emadyville » Oct 17th, '09, 17:35

Eminemislegend wrote:Loved it :worship:


ending was phenomenal :y:
Menzo wrote:Its cuz you're dope and Daddy Dubs. No one fucks with that


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Re: Lightest Of Work. (Sorry J-Roc, That Phrase Owns) RESPONCE

Postby Relapse.LP » Oct 17th, '09, 18:09

An incentive to a response. :p
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: Lightest Of Work. (Sorry J-Roc, That Phrase Owns) RESPONCE

Postby gutawafang » Oct 19th, '09, 03:54

Loved Scotty's chorus.

And Anon, def FIRE.

I don't know what to say. Fucking dope. :y:
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