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Drug Life Party Hard(keystyle)

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Drug Life Party Hard(keystyle)

Postby Just Silver » Oct 17th, '09, 03:35

Hey guys this is a must at parties
lsd pcp and i think smarties?
so fucked the walls are just enlarging
and fell in a daze after we blazed and cant see a darn thing
pixelated images yelling and the barking
barely alive or at least i must think
hyperventalating deeply on my way to the sink
puked for five minutes robotussin pink
whose that guy next to the egypt sphinx
why do i see purple everytime i blink
swear theres something wrong but hope there isnt
maybe sprinkled dope in the roach given
cuz there all crazy i mean real talk
lifting myself on the ground the way a seal walks
cant feel my face wrist and sternum
this is a place of party not concernin
so friends leave and sayin im having a nice time
well my trips fucked youve never had one like mine
try to go to bed but illusions occur
contusions for sure and im slurrin my words
then came a talking bird with a message
"you keep this up man youll be arrested"
i said no way punched it in its beak
you think im bad now i havent hit my peak
rollin down halls as well as ican
hold on for dear life or ill die by my own hands
slipped fell straight into the driveway
woke up next day surrounded by what i had ate
party party what a great day
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Re: Drug Life Party Hard(keystyle)

Postby Yah-hah » Oct 17th, '09, 07:58

Pretty dope not gonna lie homie. Startin to come out with that heat man serious
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

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Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Drug Life Party Hard(keystyle)

Postby Solace » Oct 17th, '09, 17:28

For a keystyling it was nice, though it gets just boring in the middle, maybe try some more complex flows.
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