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Massive Collab Complete

Postby Fa-Q » Oct 17th, '09, 22:00

(Fa-Q)
Two lesbians, a dildo, and they fist their crotch,
Stuck up her pussy, where the fucks her wrist watch,
4.0 is their tit size,
Not enough tissue for a boob job,
So they each sit and cries,
Sick of them crying so I took the cunts life,
Beat them both to death with the blunt of a knife,
After I start a forest fire, just to smoke trees,
Pull my nuts out give them to the dead body,
and said stroke these,
Makin fun of christians praying, with broke knees,


(Derdy PK)
I choke these bitches with pieces of floss,
it isn't my fault all your nieces are lost,
they had a myspace girl look at my face,
I'll stick my cock in your ass & fuck you sideways,
your cell phone vibrates its an unknown call,
all you see next is shadows move across the wall,
the most hated rapper with the illest from TR,
we take creative writing turn it into an E.R,
because we are the best that you find today,
I used to have hope & dreams until I threw it away,
tore myself apart like a paper mashay,
imma kick these rhymes till i'm old & grey,
my last rap will end up in a suicide letter,
at least when i'm dead i'll know my life is better,
cuz i'm tired of the rain & the shitty weather,
imma end my verse now & pass the shine to drama setter,


(Drama Setter)
It's 2 am in the morning when I jump out the car,
last hollow and then I recoil the damned Cigar,
Two bitches join me with her hands around my back,
one of them J.Alba oh no I think I'm on a fucking Crack,
Derdy and Fa-Q are on two hot girls,
wanna 40 Oz ? and the girls, OH yes
pouring 40 oz's on her skinny stomachs,
my girls are horny so they shout "Stop that,"
showing fuck finger and I join them for a threesome,
cant decide where I should start it from,


(Gutawafang)
Chew on a dick like you enjoying banana split,
Having no contest to win, so I let you fuckers spit,
Yeah, spit rads cuz you eat bad, sit back, while I kick rats,
Cockroaches I bitchslap, with my pesticide-big-set,
Burger King ain't got a throne cuz the crown's stolen,
Microphone sounds broken, but surrounds open,
Nothing to break, nothing to hate, no job to blow,
You get depressed you know that's the deepest you go,


(Termin8r)
Dynamite pack or two, placed on the Eiffel Tower,
To show these muthafuckaz I can still fight the power,
With Michael Myers, watchin him tryna hump a keg,
While Im yellin ILLUMINATI! along with Drunkendeath,
Fuck this shit, Im tellin you, I really cant give a crap,
Its not that I wont, I cant, I have a mechanical crack,
Hermaticly sealed, plus one of my testicle's black,
The other one's scared, constantly gettin panic attacks,
Actin so mad, complainin bout his bad fuckin haircut,
I'ma let someone else continue the talk bout their nuts,


(Le tunisien)
Life has become pain & grief,
this blood stains my sleeve,
my friends say its not too late to leave ...
seem fine thinking I'm in the middle of crack town,
with 9th wonder melodies playing in the background,
walking the streets im up to my ankles in smoke,
angry angels with ropes,want to strangle my throat,
this place is amazing as hell, I think im embracing it well,
saw a Beware of Dog sign next to Valcore chasing his tail,
he wipes his ass on a Magic carpet with aladdins face on it,
Dogs don't chase cars..but Dragons Chase comets,


(FAME)
Fuck it, I’m a crazy chick,
Quick! You trip! Slick,
Slip on a dick bitch!
Ya twitch, switch blades,
In a ditch with hazy eyes,
TR shady, we only rise,
Your advised to stop fucking guys,
Word to the wise, cover your thighs,
Your disguise? A part of you starts to die,
Homo, looking like you were lost fucking in a gay porno,


(McZu)
You don’t want problems with me cause you-is-thin like Whitney,
Tempt me and your life ends, bye,
Fake fuckers I call ‘em Hentai,
Then a sigh, it’s emcee Zu the pioneer,
The speakers show how I end careers,
Spear ya and say Oops I did it again,
Who’s pen game is then-Ready to raise hell in heav-en,
With an ill will that's pounding the. sev-en,


(Bullet Boy)
get ready to party in this place,
lindsay you a disgrace, wit you,
and your lesbian relationships save it bitch, dont wanna hear shit,
puke all over the floor,
and on your mothers glass door,
go stick uranus up your anus,
show it to the media,it become famous,
go stick a tic-tac in your ass crack,
as i smile back, suck on the sack,


(Menzo)
I kicked a fool once and called him a critical cunt,
The little punk said my work was just lyrical junk,
So I smacked him so hard until his head fully spun,
Cryin out minimal grunts as I stomped upon his gut,
Grabbed a handful of hair and shoved his face into the dirt,
He gasped for fresh air but I made him taste the Earth,
Til the fucker stopped breathing, he was no longer hurt,
Got up, started leaving, ‘fore I heard a sombre jerk,
Turned around, next thing I knew I was on the ground,
Strapped down to a rock, bounded to the same spot,
Couldn’t move, and I heard a noise from over my shoulder,
I started to feel colder as a voice became bolder,
Believe it or not, it was Scully and Mulder,
The people from X-files, creepin like pedophiles,
He gave me a crooked smile, “we’ve followed you for miles,”
They started spankin me in the ass, and callin me lazy,
But my boys from TR Shady came and went all crazy,
Cuttin them into pieces and with no sense of regret,
We represent TR Shady, don’t you ever forget,
Last edited by Fa-Q on Oct 19th, '09, 00:25, edited 2 times in total.
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Re: Massive Collab Complete

Postby MCyobi » Oct 17th, '09, 22:06

Wow this is cool,next time I want in
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Re: Massive Collab Complete

Postby Relapse.LP » Oct 17th, '09, 22:07

Damn...

All the subject content is a little random and varies from verse to verse, but the multies are pretty dope. :y:

Could have had a better concept though, IMO.
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: Massive Collab Complete

Postby Emadyville » Oct 17th, '09, 22:09

Fa-Q had the best verse imo, you all seemed to sound like eminem in your lyrics idk if that was the point of the collab or not, but I def enjoyed this whole thing, you all worked well together/off each other, mad props :worship:
Menzo wrote:Its cuz you're dope and Daddy Dubs. No one fucks with that


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Re: Massive Collab Complete

Postby Fa-Q » Oct 17th, '09, 22:17

Lol tHanks Emadyville...yea my friend said I sould like 99 Em
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Re: Massive Collab Complete

Postby Fa-Q » Oct 18th, '09, 01:09

Yea menzo we will do another one
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Re: Massive Collab Complete

Postby MCyobi » Oct 18th, '09, 01:13

Fa-Q wrote:Yea menzo we will do another one

I wanna be in another one :D
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Re: Massive Collab Complete

Postby FAME » Oct 18th, '09, 01:30

:y: Turned out great
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Re: Massive Collab Complete

Postby Fa-Q » Oct 18th, '09, 01:37

Yea it did FAME
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Re: Massive Collab Complete

Postby Spyder » Oct 18th, '09, 05:20

i actually really liked Tunisiens
and i thought Termin8er had some fuckin funny lines.

everyone else came pretty good
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Re: Massive Collab Complete

Postby Fa-Q » Oct 18th, '09, 07:03

the next one will be better :D
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Re: Massive Collab Complete

Postby Spyder » Oct 18th, '09, 18:24

i gotta get in this lol
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Re: Massive Collab Complete

Postby Le Tunisien » Oct 18th, '09, 18:55

this turned to be great :flower: ... some funny lines there termin8ter :smoking:
btw,faq u did a mistake copy pasting my 2nd and 3rd line xd

it was supposed to be like :

Life has become pain & grief, this blood stains my sleeve,
my friends say its not too late to leave ...
seem fine, thinking im in the middle of crack town,
with 9th wonder melodies playing in the background,


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Re: Massive Collab Complete

Postby Fa-Q » Oct 18th, '09, 19:29

K fixed it tunisien...sorry about that
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Re: Massive Collab Complete

Postby Fa-Q » Oct 19th, '09, 00:26

If you want in next time PM me
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