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Fa-Q - Would You (Feat Yahhah)

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Fa-Q - Would You (Feat Yahhah)

Postby Fa-Q » Oct 18th, '09, 19:51

(Fa-Q)
I you feel alone in darkness,
I'll die, yet I try and heal a bone in my carcass,
I dig a grave, because the sin in my soul, is too big to save,
But if the mud dries, my blood tries,
To revive me, my dead body yells and is screaming,
My sweat boils like hells steaming,
My head empty, and is replaced with bells ringing,
When I die, I want my ashes spread,
Funeral, with flashes of my head,
As I lay motionless, emotionless, in my casket dead,
I saw another soul, and I ask it and said,
Am I in heaven, hell or purgatory,
He asked well I heard your story,
And felt good for you, and what you should do,
Is try and live another life,
And if you ever get married, love your wife,
Have two kids, and a small home,
And if you get lost on your road, call Rome,
Listen to you heart, and if its still beating,
And if you bleed, all the blood spilled bleeding,


If I cry, would you cry,
If I was lost, would you find me,
If all I see is darkness, would you be behind me, (x2)


(Fa-Q)
Cry with disgrace, as I try and face,
My fears, and if I fly to space,
Box with nebulas, in the rings of saturn,
My stale lips cold, predictable, like all things in a pattern,
Is a scar you earned, like a candle too far burned,
So if I grow a beard, know I'm weird,
Just lie in my coffin, cause I death know it, so I showed it neared,
Ten more lines, I'm like a soldier, trying to defend war crimes,
No stopping, no yeilding, like I'm on a street, ignoring signs,
Is it asphault, dirt road, or side street,
Or are my paths, controlled by my wide feet,
My dirty feet pace back and fourth,
Like if South would attack North,
Like your inner soul, attacks your pride,
Like the wick stands burnt, and the wax is dried,
When I'm writing, my pen inscribes my descriptions,
Like a girl already beautiful, but can't wait to get her lips done,


(Yahhah)
It seems to take so long to come up with the words,
Even though I'm constantly living lost and disturbed,
Drowning in this ocean that holds all my regrets though,
Seems like it holds only the ones that I let go,
Even after I've said so, I still can't seem to admit this,
Because the sunrise eclipses my life in existence,
Are you reviving the witness or just reviving my heart,
So why do I quit this just after I start,
Scriblin my words writin all in the dark,
Losing pieces to my puzzle in this struggle so now I'm falling apart,
Every inch of my life is spread out on these pages,
I've lost all the traces of memories on these faces,
My mind races just to fill the empty spaces,
Just have some patience why you want me to hurry,
But don't worry I've got no problem bein buried,
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Re: Fa-Q - Would You (Feat Yahhah)

Postby Fa-Q » Oct 19th, '09, 00:28

Hmmm....not really feeling the chorus second time reading it
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Re: Fa-Q - Would You (Feat Yahhah)

Postby Fa-Q » Oct 19th, '09, 03:29

Thanks Amadeo
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Re: Fa-Q - Would You (Feat Yahhah)

Postby Fa-Q » Oct 19th, '09, 03:53

Thanks Amadeo
Last edited by Fa-Q on Oct 19th, '09, 06:38, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Fa-Q - Would You (Feat Yahhah)

Postby Fa-Q » Oct 19th, '09, 06:37

Hey Amadeo what do you think of the chorus
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