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Cant fuck wit me

Postby BILI » Oct 19th, '09, 18:57

You dont wanna fuck wit me,cause I`m not gonna stop
Ima march on you fake bitches,your bout 2 get popped
You act tough,but really your scarred,and you want peace
Your behind your pc,I`m on a corner screaming Fuck da Police
Your like a glass,I can see through you,and figure your tactic
I feel fuckin fantastic,cause your bout to be wrapped in plastic
See bitch you just cant fuck wit me,I`m like a fuckin boss
After I`m through wit you,your family`ll be searchin for fuckin corpse

:whistle:
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Re: Cant fuck wit me

Postby Wic Kid » Oct 19th, '09, 19:06

BILI wrote:Ima march on you fake n****s,your bout 2 get popped


Despite the censorship, you might wanna replace the word. I mean, it aint right, you know?
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Re: Cant fuck wit me

Postby BILI » Oct 19th, '09, 19:07

Termin8er wrote:
BILI wrote:Ima march on you fake n****s,your bout 2 get popped


Despite the censorship, you might wanna replace the word. I mean, it aint right, you know?

what word, :shifty: :whistle:
any fed?? :sweating:
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Re: Cant fuck wit me

Postby Wic Kid » Oct 19th, '09, 19:08

I didnt really dig it, cuz I think you can do way better...

Sorry :flower:
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Re: Cant fuck wit me

Postby BILI » Oct 19th, '09, 19:10

Termin8er wrote:I didnt really dig it, cuz I can think you can do way better...

Sorry :flower:

its cool,well its cause I`m not used 2 this killin shit,I`m more into emotional stuff
but thx for fed anyways ;)
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Re: Cant fuck wit me

Postby Wic Kid » Oct 19th, '09, 19:27

No problem. If u feel like it, check out my shit and leave some feed... :flower:

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Re: Cant fuck wit me

Postby shabbymind » Oct 19th, '09, 19:44

BILI wrote:You dont wanna fuck wit me,cause I`m not gonna stop
Ima march on you fake bitches,your bout 2 get popped
You act tough,but really your scarred,and you want peace
Your behind your pc,I`m on a corner screaming Fuck da Police
Your like a glass,I can see through you,and figure your tactic
I feel fuckin fantastic,cause your bout to be wrapped in plastic
See bitch you just cant fuck wit me,I`m like a fuckin boss
After I`m through wit you,your family`ll be searchin for fuckin corpse

:whistle:



yeah you could do better.. lol...

i liked better the one about coming back
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Re: Cant fuck wit me

Postby Le Tunisien » Oct 19th, '09, 21:42

this was alright :y:
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Re: Cant fuck wit me

Postby eminemgirl1234 » Oct 20th, '09, 16:20

um...
"Sometimes I feel so alone,
I just don't know, feels like I been down this road before.
So lonely and cold, it's like something takes over me,
soon as I go home and close the door.
Kinda feels like Déjà Vu, I wanna get away from this place I do,
but I can't and I wont say I tried but I know that's a lie cuz I don't,
and why I just don't know...

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Re: Cant fuck wit me

Postby gutawafang » Oct 21st, '09, 02:44

I see you bit a phrase. But still pretty okay man. Too short. 16-32 I recommend. :p

Keep dropping homie. ;)
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Re: Cant fuck wit me

Postby BILI » Oct 21st, '09, 13:10

gutawafang wrote:I see you bit a phrase. But still pretty okay man. Too short. 16-32 I recommend. :p

Keep dropping homie. ;)

I`ll be dropin more pretty soon
thx for feed,homie :D :p
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