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Dr. Syco

Postby Wic Kid » Oct 18th, '09, 18:05

Just a song I wrote a while ago, after watchin an episode of Dexter, lol. Nuthin special, just wanted to know what you guys think of it.


What you about to experience is way beyond the pain
Chains on ya wrists , but its maybe off the chain
Desribe me the agony you feel and rate it, 1 - 8
Its the scale, I've been told Im like Da Vinci wit a blade
Simply inhumane, victim layin on the desk
Payin its debts to the society wit the chest open
Every next moment there is less hope that
My posessed motive will stay unfulfilled, so lets
Proceed, now I got this woman with a seed
Inside of her, after what she did, I cant let her breed
I just cant let her breathe, and the law is inadequate
To deal with these things cuz its falls are repetitive
Thats why Im here, to make sure the worst ones
Are treated properly, this cunt killed her first son
And her daughter afterwards in a way u never heard of
Double murder, now you realize I cant let the birth of
This child happen, Im puttin it to an end
Without anaesthetic, miss, you will conciously attend
My attempt to perform this enormous step forward
Removing a fetus with a needle in the court room


I dont feel like typin the whole damn song, so this is just the first verse.

Feedback appreciated... :flower:
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Re: Dr. Syco

Postby Wic Kid » Oct 18th, '09, 18:33

Amadeo wrote:pretty impressive, Termin8er. the multis were good & it doesn't seem like you're forcing them like some other writers here. keep up the good work.

termin8er is mad underrated here. :y:


Thanks, man. I appreciate it... :worship:
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Re: Dr. Syco

Postby Wic Kid » Oct 18th, '09, 21:46

My first time in creative writing and just one feed... :'(

Fine... :crossed: ...Nobody wants to play with me? Fuck you then...Bitch...Guys are always mean to me anyways...All they do is rub gum in my hair and stuff...You guys are going to make me sad...Im gunna cry...I'm crying..Im gunna tell my mom...MOMMMMMMMM... :loudcry:
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Re: Dr. Syco

Postby Relapse.LP » Oct 18th, '09, 21:59

Nice multies and the concept is pretty good. :hooray: :wub:
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: Dr. Syco

Postby Wic Kid » Oct 18th, '09, 22:12

Thanks. :flower:
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Re: Dr. Syco

Postby BILI » Oct 19th, '09, 21:58

This is pretty impressive man,straight dope :worship: ,now keep postin CW section more ;)
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Re: Dr. Syco

Postby Wic Kid » Oct 19th, '09, 22:09

Gracias... :happy:
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