Coleon - Syllable Samurai (Katana Blades)

[classthe_king]

Wow, all i can say is wow. It flowed perfectly, and that rhyming was insane. I know you weren't working on punches and just rhymes but the way it sounded outloud with all the rhymes was insane. I'd love to see more of this kind of shit.

[gutawafang]

Crazy fucking vocab. Loved how it flows so well because it rhymes all the way man. Cool shit.

[Relapse.LP]

Syllable Swordman's retarded
cousin lol

not nearly as cool but still okay

savin punches so might as well do some hard rhyming

feed please

congrugate on the beat with darkness hate and deceit
conjur flames from defeat, contemplate and decree
encarcerate an MC, bars drop adjacent to thee
exonerate when i speak from murder cases on beats
tolerate to degrees but i'm not fake in the least
never tastin defeat, Katana blades as my teeth
scar and slay when i speak, Renegadin a Feat.
carve my name in a beat, harm an dismay to the weak
when i display on the meak, char and blaze wit my speech
often crave like a beast, an authors brain in my teeth
all his remains that i eat, skulls impaled and emptied
raise kane with the heat, ya'll epic fails as MC's
ya'll Sarah Pallins ta me, you ain't amazin to me
while i be sprayin, nay sayin, an filletin these teens
everyday in the streets, but not a gangta ya see
forsaken rhyme sayer, i'm just angry and keen

I dig the Wu-Tang style.

Just kidding; it sounds nothing like Wu, but I was impressed by the vocabulary and rhyming schemes.

I don't think you were focusing on punchlines or wordplay, but the rhyming was good enough for me. Some people over-exaggerate their wordplay and then it just gets annoying. Not you though.

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Lmao @ your signature.

You really ghost-writing? I wonder who would want someone to ghost-write for them.

[classthe_king]

Lmao @ your signature.

You really ghost-writing? I wonder who would want someone to ghost-write for them.