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Re: Coleon - Verbal Tyrant (Prolix)

Postby classthe_king » Oct 20th, '09, 03:44

Wow, your dropping alot lately. This was sick to, more on the lyrical side then the rhyming side as with the last one. Don't know which one i like better. That last line, verbal Vorheas, cops hide when dispatched, sounded really sick to me for some reason.
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Re: Coleon - Verbal Tyrant (Prolix)

Postby Emadyville » Oct 20th, '09, 04:15

straight fire, very impressive all around :y: :y:
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Re: Coleon - Verbal Tyrant (Prolix)

Postby gutawafang » Oct 20th, '09, 04:17

flow so thick, allowed Noah to set sail

WOW. :worship:

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