Phone Call

by **eminemgirl1234** » Oct 15th, '09, 16:19

(Ring, Ring
Hello?
Yeah, what's up?
Uh, Who is this?
You know who this is.
Um, no I don't
Yeah...you do!
Who you yell at? and anyways who are you!
I'm your boyfriend...remember?
Your my boyfriend?!
Yeah, I'm your boyfriend
Kaleb...?
Yeah, this is Kaleb. Am I talkin' to Malina?
Yeah, So um Kaleb. Where are you?
I'm locked up!
Your locked up?! What happened?!
Me and my buddys where messing with this hobo...
Yeah?
...so we um, was just, you know messing with the guy...
Wow! Why where you guys messing with the guy?
I don't know we were just messing with the guy!
Oh Ok. Yelling at me for?
Bye!
What? Wait, you never told me why your locked up?
BYE!
I can't hear you?!
BYE!
Ok, Now I can hear you. Ok, Bye!
Love you girl! Behave!
Love you too, Maybe I might...
Cont. in #2

by **Drama Setter** » Oct 15th, '09, 16:28

You call it a creative writing ?

by **eminemgirl1234** » Oct 15th, '09, 21:52

If I call it creative writing then what do you call it?

huh?

Website · by **Solace** » Oct 18th, '09, 05:05

eminemgirl1234 wrote:If I call it creative writing then what do you call it? huh?

I call it crap.

by **eminemgirl1234** » Oct 19th, '09, 15:33

Well, fuck y'all then! Shit!

by **shabbymind** » Oct 19th, '09, 16:48

Solace wrote:
eminemgirl1234 wrote:If I call it creative writing then what do you call it? huh?

I call it crap.

ahahah.. i would have to give 10/10 for this critic because it is all right looooool

no seriously......thats grabage...if you want to write shh like that...do it in a not pad and keep it away from everybody..dont ever ever have someone looking at it..dont....you will get embarassed...loooool.....do you own thing but keep it secret...matter fact tell us you stop writing that stupid and write secretly right befoe going to bed....hide that note pad..lock it...keep the key in a secret spot where only you know where to find....dont event mention the existence of that key and make sur no one sees you pickin up that key...now.... im just gonna pretend i aint ever waste my time on reading your post..holla

Website · by **Solace** » Oct 19th, '09, 21:59

shabbymind wrote:
Solace wrote:
eminemgirl1234 wrote:If I call it creative writing then what do you call it? huh?

I call it crap.

ahahah.. i would have to give 10/10 for this critic because it is all right looooool

no seriously......thats grabage...if you want to write shh like that...do it in a not pad and keep it away from everybody..dont ever ever have someone looking at it..dont....you will get embarassed...loooool.....do you own thing but keep it secret...matter fact tell us you stop writing that stupid and write secretly right befoe going to bed....hide that note pad..lock it...keep the key in a secret spot where only you know where to find....dont event mention the existence of that key and make sur no one sees you pickin up that key...now.... im just gonna pretend i aint ever waste my time on reading your post..holla

Amen to that.

by **eminemgirl1234** » Oct 20th, '09, 16:03

shabbymind wrote:
Solace wrote:
eminemgirl1234 wrote:If I call it creative writing then what do you call it? huh?

I call it crap.

Since I call it Creative and you call it Crap, isn't it Creative Crap? The reason why I wrote is exactly for negative feedback...

by **Fa-Q** » Oct 20th, '09, 16:13

What was the point of that

by **eminemgirl1234** » Oct 20th, '09, 16:15

I want to be a writer and this book I'm writing is my fire, and negative feedback is my feul...

by **Fa-Q** » Oct 20th, '09, 16:22

Btw I wasn't being an asswipe I was just curious

Website · by **Solace** » Oct 20th, '09, 21:35

eminemgirl1234 wrote:
Solace wrote:
eminemgirl1234 wrote:If I call it creative writing then what do you call it? huh?

I call it crap.

Since I call it Creative and you call it Crap, isn't it Creative Crap? The reason why I wrote is exactly for negative feedback...

No, since you call it Creative you have a twisted definition of the word Creative. And since I call it crap, I call it crap. This isn't mathematics, though a drop-out like you wouldn't realize what is and what isn't. You don't add two opinions to get one fact. The reason you wrote this was stupid, a reflection upon yourself actually. You're trying to get the fuel to the flames? False fuels won't run the engine. Though I'm sure you tried really hard on this Phone Call skit (aka Piece Of Trash). You want to be a writer? Ha, good luck on that.

:flower:

by **eminemgirl1234** » Oct 20th, '09, 21:49

First of all, That was funny and second, you know what, your just wasting my god-damn time. You can't tell me what I'm not gonna be! I'm gonna be a hell of a good writer! So, fuck you! Wanna comment?

by **J Roc** » Oct 20th, '09, 22:41

Solace wrote:
eminemgirl1234 wrote:
Solace wrote:No, since you call it Creative you have a twisted definition of the word Creative. And since I call it crap, I call it crap. This isn't mathematics, though a drop-out like you wouldn't realize what is and what isn't. You don't add two opinions to get one fact. The reason you wrote this was stupid, a reflection upon yourself actually. You're trying to get the fuel to the flames? False fuels won't run the engine. Though I'm sure you tried really hard on this Phone Call skit (aka Piece Of Trash). You want to be a writer? Ha, good luck on that.

Lmfaoo

i liked it

by **EminemIVLife** » Oct 20th, '09, 23:27

what was that exactly tho?
How would you define it?

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