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Shake It!!! (unreleased clubish vibe & flow)

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Shake It!!! (unreleased clubish vibe & flow)

Postby DƎRDYPK » Oct 19th, '09, 17:26

I did this a while ago when I 1st started getting into multies
If I am correct the 1st verse I originally wrote was on the Alex Chiu forum & it was a rap to Rayanna
as you can see I changed it up & well yeah check it out......
kinda stale but I still like it
if anyone wants to jump on this (cause I still need a 3rd verse)
or needs any verses filled hit me up on MSN


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[chrous]
shake it to the left now shake it to the right
we could get it popping we could party all night
looking to the stars we could do what you like
if you wanna get down lets do it tonight
[repeat]

[verse one]
i see you in the club you a sexy little kitten
you got more hands inside ya than a muhfuckin mitten
I heard you like to swallow you don't like spitten?
you into hip hop? can you check out what I'v written
something aint right i smell a wiff of chicken
how can i smell with all the coke i'v been sniffing
up on the internet look at what i'm clicken
some animal porn yeah my sins are unforgiven
fuck with PK & your skull gets a splitting
kicking derdy shit that's my one & only mission
i'll snipe your dad out while the cocksuckers fishing
kick your mom's ass in the kitchen while she bitching
i'm dipping & skipping all the weed got me tripping
overdose on T.H.C with this bong ripping
i'll say it like this "suck my dick while i'm pissing"
i'm hotter than 2 tall girls fucking kissing

[chrous]
shake it to the left now shake it to the right
we could get it popping we could party all night
looking to the stars we could do what you like
if you wanna get down lets do it tonight
[repeat]

[verse two]
i can lay you on the bed & i'll make a special touch
fuck you like an animal make ya feel the rush
fuck you in the throat on your chin is my nuts
i wanna special butterfly I don't want no sluts
I wanna punk bitch that can show me love
if you come to me crying then i'll give you a hug
you can bring me higher than any other drug
i'm up from the ground when im facedown in the mud
start something special & the little girls will judge
because your in the sheets with me they always had a crush
they always wanna fuck but that's something I won't rub
bitch you's a scrub you could use a fucking tub
don't play stupid bitch your acting like a nub
I find a derdy bitch & i'll be her little sub
we can get it shitty 2 girls 1 cup
naw lets just fuck with the stereo up


[chrous]
shake it to the left now shake it to the right
we could get it popping we could party all night
looking to the stars we could do what you like
if you wanna get down lets do it tonight
[repeat]
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Re: Shake It!!! (unreleased clubish vibe & flow)

Postby macdaddy019967 » Oct 19th, '09, 17:50

damn this song is hella catchy i like it :y:
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Re: Shake It!!! (unreleased clubish vibe & flow)

Postby DƎRDYPK » Oct 19th, '09, 17:53

macdaddy019967 wrote:damn this song is hella catchy i like it :y:


glad you like it homie :worship:
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Re: Shake It!!! (unreleased clubish vibe & flow)

Postby DƎRDYPK » Oct 20th, '09, 16:24

53 views & only one reply ? :unsure:
you guys must really hate me :'( :'(
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