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Re: Alijack Diss

Postby J Roc » Oct 20th, '09, 16:39

$(@TTY B@Y wrote:key-styled

this dude is a closet homosexual, i would know


LMFAOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
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Re: Alijack Diss

Postby Wic Kid » Oct 20th, '09, 16:40

I like it, good job. Not too complex, but thats the way a diss should be IMO.

No offence to AJ, but Scotty, Im surprised you didnt mention nuthin about his constant repetition of the word "dickridin"...
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Re: Alijack Diss

Postby J Roc » Oct 20th, '09, 16:44

$(@TTY B@Y wrote:
J roc wrote:
$(@TTY B@Y wrote:key-styled

this dude is a closet homosexual, i would know


LMFAOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO


hardy har har


lol ... uhh it was okay. i'm not feeling how u rhyme tho you rhyme with the beginning of the word then use the other half of the word as the beginning of the new line .... it kinda ruin's the flow .
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Re: Alijack Diss

Postby neversnooze » Oct 20th, '09, 17:56

the flow was good, and i liked how you had those pauses like mo- ment and let-down. multies were decent. it was a good diss and it was all facts that you mentioned, so good personals.9/10

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Re: Alijack Diss

Postby Relapse.LP » Oct 20th, '09, 23:52

What's so bad about AliJack? :'(
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: Alijack Diss

Postby gutawafang » Oct 21st, '09, 01:27

LMAO. So much beefs lately huh? :smoking:
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Re: Alijack Diss

Postby macdaddy019967 » Oct 21st, '09, 02:01

Why diss alijack he a cool dude
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Re: Alijack Diss

Postby gutawafang » Oct 21st, '09, 02:02

macdaddy019967 wrote:Why diss alijack he a cool dude

Exactly.
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Re: Alijack Diss

Postby AliJack » Oct 21st, '09, 12:50

lol. I don't mind that a homo that im never gonna meet in my life doesn't like me. Glad you know about the closet tho.
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Re: Alijack Diss

Postby AliJack » Oct 21st, '09, 12:54

and man. You think I give a fuck if you can beat my ass in real life, or pound it in your wet dreams, or whatever your fantasy is? You tellin everybody that you think you'd beat them up in real life, who the fuck wants your opinion anyway? I'm a rap beginner, so I can't even reply to this, so that's a low blow. I don't know if i'm mature enough to get you asshurt, or if you're stupid enough to come down to my level. but goodluck postin disses. You might feel less homo. :y:
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Re: Alijack Diss

Postby SajN » Oct 21st, '09, 14:12

$(@TTY B@Y wrote:i agree with SajN .. this beef is becoming obsessive to all of those who are involved. and it exposes dickriding so much that it becomes embarrassing.


Beef again...



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Re: Alijack Diss

Postby AliJack » Oct 21st, '09, 14:14

I just gotta say, thanks for puttin' a quarter in my mortal meter.


I'm not gonna participate in this bullshit. :n:
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Re: Alijack Diss

Postby Le Tunisien » Oct 21st, '09, 17:01

SCOTTY FTW :worship: :worship: :worship:

fuck yeah,this ali faggot is so annoying :y:
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Re: Alijack Diss

Postby AliJack » Oct 21st, '09, 17:04

Funny how only the homo's on here hate me.
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Re: Alijack Diss

Postby Le Tunisien » Oct 21st, '09, 17:12

AliJack wrote:Funny how only the homo's on here hate me.

no but,the funny thing is , how you admitted that you are a rap beginner,dawg fuck off
u'r only here just cuz you homosexually love Eminem hahahahha
and yeah you are always here rofl,everytime i log in i find you online and posting wtf???
and all you do here is fucking around with you bullshit,damn you'r pathetic,i really hate you
and all what scotty said in his diss lyrics is pure truth :worship:
ITS THE TRUTH,ADMIT IT BITCH!!
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