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Postby RapName » Oct 20th, '09, 20:49

We should go together and make a Haystak diss. Ya know Em ain't coming for him, so we should compile a fucking raw diss and one or more of the best rappers on here should lay it all down on a beat. Let Em know we got his mofo back.
Those who want can all write a couple of lines or more each, and then we structure it when we're satisfied.

What y'all think? Would be kinda hardcore. I love the idea. And just to lett y'all know, i didn't come up with the idea. I'm just making the thread :8)

C'mon TrShady. Let's get the rhyming on!
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Re: TrShady Haystak diss

Postby Steve Spag » Oct 20th, '09, 20:54

I think that's what crosses the line from being a fan to a Stan...
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Re: TrShady Haystak diss

Postby Cookzee » Oct 20th, '09, 20:55

yeah i came up with it, just taking credit :thumbsup2: this mofo gon be :stretcher: away
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Re: TrShady Haystak diss

Postby RapName » Oct 20th, '09, 20:55

Steve Spag wrote:I think that's what crosses the line from being a fan to a Stan...

It may, but so what? it's not like we're driving off a fucking bridge, we just rhyme for the man.
strikeboy wrote:Hey Alaine. I like young girls obviously and I don't get the oppurtunity to talk to them at all in fact. Well, I don't care really what you're like on the inside and I just really want you to come to bed with me. Would you do that if you could? Even if you were just average on the outside (but not fat) I could like you if you sounded smart.

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Re: TrShady Haystak diss

Postby Cookzee » Oct 20th, '09, 20:55

aint really stan, how can i put this

religious members defend their god on an everday basis lmfao
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Re: TrShady Haystak diss

Postby RapName » Oct 20th, '09, 20:56

Cookzee wrote:yeah i came up with it, just taking credit :thumbsup2: this mofo gon be :stretcher: away

that's good. *credit given*

post your rhymes man, i liked the first lines!
strikeboy wrote:Hey Alaine. I like young girls obviously and I don't get the oppurtunity to talk to them at all in fact. Well, I don't care really what you're like on the inside and I just really want you to come to bed with me. Would you do that if you could? Even if you were just average on the outside (but not fat) I could like you if you sounded smart.

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Re: TrShady Haystak diss

Postby Cookzee » Oct 20th, '09, 20:59

you peadophile punk, imma leave you lying on your face flat
is a true a kid found your needle in you haystack
you a fag, who many people done and say that
take a hint thickness, TR and shady go way back
we have his back, to get him, tackle us first
were all kids, so sure your gonna run up here sure-
ly i don't want you sweat whilst your coming to get me
imma put it to you clearly, hold up just let me
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Re: TrShady Haystak diss

Postby Emadyville » Oct 20th, '09, 21:03

Steve Spag wrote:I think that's what crosses the line from being a fan to a Stan...


thank you, you're 100% right :y:
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Re: TrShady Haystak diss

Postby Cookzee » Oct 20th, '09, 21:04

Emadyville wrote:
Steve Spag wrote:I think that's what crosses the line from being a fan to a Stan...


thank you, you're 100% right :y:



so your gonna let him get dissed coz shady won't do shit about it, c'mon, defend your god, wait i mean, defend your favorite artist :sweating:
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Re: TrShady Haystak diss

Postby pHiLLip fARkLe » Oct 20th, '09, 21:08

hey haystak youve rapped since way back and you still aint gone plat your wack
your so goddamn fat pancakes must be ya crack, matter of fact you could have a state map tatted on your back.
and im talkin a fold out... what you gunna say when farkles penis is pulled out?
you gunna pout? throw a tantrum and shout, eh, youll prolly just have a pool of drool drip from your mouth. you clamin the south, well so am i, dro blowin lifted in the sky, im gettin high in boyshorts exposing my thighs, while you travel state to state FIXING CARNIVAL RIDES.

bitch. hahaha, and i dont rap.
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Re: TrShady Haystak diss

Postby Solace » Oct 20th, '09, 21:38

Seems extremely dumb to diss through text. Pointless unless in audio.
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Re: TrShady Haystak diss

Postby EminemIVLife » Oct 20th, '09, 22:02

One Mic wrote:I cant really be arsed atm and I'm not a good writer but just thought of this on the spot

"I could fuck your career up and I could do it daily
trying to diss Eminem, but what you really want is Hailie
You fat motherfucker, why you still alive? Let me take it back to 1995"


Hopefully a good writer will use the idea of Haystack's paedophile rapist ass, really wanting Hailie and not Eminem.....and the 1995 bit was when he was convicted I think.


Haha.. that kinda plays nicely into his paedphile past... nice
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Re: TrShady Haystak diss

Postby EminemIVLife » Oct 20th, '09, 22:03

Who has the best flow on the site and who can actually produce well ?
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Re: TrShady Haystak diss

Postby R.A.W. » Oct 20th, '09, 23:44

"its easy to see that the video of three girls sucking your dick is fake*,
only way you can get that kind of pleasure is thru rape"
(*reffering to one of his music videos)

"you can't se your wee-wee while you pee,
youre in need of your mother to hold it steady, ..ready?"

"We're a fanbase, get ready for the chase, we are everywhere! (...sumthin like that)"

"next time you get lucky with a girl, don't feel secure, she might be one of us, biting your balls off"
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Re: TrShady Haystak diss

Postby gutawafang » Oct 21st, '09, 01:29

LOL. Can.
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