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Coleon - Not Crazy Anymore (Caged Beast)

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Re: Coleon - Not Crazy Anymore (Caged Beast)

Postby gutawafang » Oct 21st, '09, 01:35

I know it flows though I can't flow it. :'( Sorry. :zipped:

But the concept is perfect. I mean, it stayed on point, and the lyrics suit the title man.

This line inspired me:
in lamens i'm infected, the T Virus in my vascular

Constant drops man. Keep dropping. :flower:
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Re: Coleon - Not Crazy Anymore (Caged Beast)

Postby Just Silver » Oct 21st, '09, 01:38

like the concept very halloweenish vivid imagery and great use of adjectives
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but just wonderin its set up like a song were there more verses that got scrapped or what
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Re: Coleon - Not Crazy Anymore (Caged Beast)

Postby J Roc » Oct 21st, '09, 01:43

i dun like it cuz .... u didn't throw any J roc shout out's on ya mixtape

ish was nice lyrically tho .. Just remember whut i told u about those J Roc Shout Out's
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Re: Coleon - Not Crazy Anymore (Caged Beast)

Postby Solace » Oct 22nd, '09, 21:36

For real I liked that shit. I flowed to it fine so I don't know what Guta's talking about. Good piece overall, I liked your multies and the content was raw. :y:
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