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Coleon - Syllable Satist

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Re: Coleon - Syllable Satist

Postby gutawafang » Oct 21st, '09, 01:24

HAHAHAHA. It sucked.













JK.

I loved the multis and how it stayed on point man. Vocab's definitely mountainous-ly improved. :y:

9/10. :y:
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Re: Coleon - Syllable Satist

Postby classthe_king » Oct 21st, '09, 02:25

This is fucking dope :worship: And your telling me you can't think of anything when you've been putting this out :shakehead: [-X
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Re: Coleon - Syllable Satist

Postby Fa-Q » Oct 21st, '09, 02:30

Wow crazy insane vocab...this is really dope good drop...let's see some of that "this and other shit"
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Re: Coleon - Syllable Satist

Postby DƎRDYPK » Oct 21st, '09, 02:43

damn Cole :worship:
mad crazy mc'ing you got going there :y: :8)
I'm loving these new drops your doing :b:
keep at it!
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Re: Coleon - Syllable Satist

Postby Solace » Oct 21st, '09, 03:57

Damn, you are too good. For real bro I can't wait for some hot audio, cause your lyrics are on lock.
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Re: Coleon - Syllable Satist

Postby mcZu » Oct 21st, '09, 13:13

Rhyme scheme is on point, flow on point and the multies are on point. Though I want you to try out some more wordplay, but it is dope nontheless. Keep it up/Spottin'
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Re: Coleon - Syllable Satist

Postby Drama Setter » Oct 21st, '09, 19:16

damned cool Cloe I like it :worship:
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