Much More

[mcZu]

Written to J Dilla's Much More (RIP), feedback is appreciated.

Thinking ‘bout the past so I’m passing
The point of asking so I’m acting as King
Preaching ‘bout ass as in shit no killer
Laying words on a beat like a railroad builder
Keep up with the track see I trill her
Rest in peace Mike...
Yes I rip mic’s while y’all conceal like Blaine Dave her
Don’t think I’m common but I’m ‘bout to un-conclave her
Conclude that each days a slur
So, sure, I’m holding the pen to a certain point
And I’m trying to pin point the centre pinned joint
‘bout as long as a centipede joint
So I’m dropping more than two cents a joint
Flip up the coin I’m keeping my head up
Juggling with my angels and demons ‘till dead is up
Though the mystery aint in Bernini
I mean I’m far from mean I’m just me see
Yet people perceive me as bitter
Doesn’t matter how much a girl diss me I won’t hit her
I could fill you in like opposite of ma’am how I missed her
Naah... another day
Maybe I may one day call out mayday on a may day
And pray for days ‘till peace hits mayhem day
And gives it a piece full of peaceful spring days
That’s the dream my ink portrays...

[Just Silver]

Reminds me of my style
unique with a different point of view than most
Spottin'

PS:Spottin basically means good job keep it up its my new word

[Just Silver]

too abstract fo me man, too hard to follow, but it was still good after I broke it down

Dilla beats are ill, I wana see you go wit some more solid scheme's though and cut down on your play for once

anyway spottin' lol

p.s. i'ma pm ya wit some shit I want ya opinion on soon

basically the opposite of what im sayin love abstract and tryin to make "spottin" a forum kinda thing
thanks for usin it

[mcZu]

Reminds me of my style
unique with a different point of view than most
Spottin'

PS:Spottin basically means good job keep it up its my new word

Thanks Silver, appreciate it.

too abstract fo me man, too hard to follow, but it was still good after I broke it down

Dilla beats are ill, I wana see you go wit some more solid scheme's though and cut down on your play for once

anyway spottin' lol

p.s. i'ma pm ya wit some shit I want ya opinion on soon

Hahaha, I admit it was a lil' too abstract, but thanks Cole, appreciate it. And I may try out some more solid scheme's.. And, yes, Dilla beats are crazy.

[Drama Setter]

Props

[mcZu]

Props

Thanks Drama.