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Re: Coleon - Mirror The Grind

Postby classthe_king » Oct 22nd, '09, 02:35

damn :worship: your rhyming has been insane
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Re: Coleon - Mirror The Grind

Postby Fa-Q » Oct 22nd, '09, 02:42

That was dope...the rhyming structure was great with the

A B, C D
A B, C D...good shit
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Re: Coleon - Mirror The Grind

Postby gutawafang » Oct 22nd, '09, 03:47

:o Nice chorus. :y:
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Re: Coleon - Mirror The Grind

Postby classthe_king » Oct 22nd, '09, 03:57

gutawafang wrote::o Nice chorus. :y:


lol, never read that, who's john
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Re: Coleon - Mirror The Grind

Postby Drama Setter » Oct 22nd, '09, 07:48

Good job Cole :y:
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Re: Coleon - Mirror The Grind

Postby Le Tunisien » Oct 22nd, '09, 20:14

:worship: dope rhymes :flower:
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