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Crossing Time

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Crossing Time

Postby mcZu » Oct 21st, '09, 19:15

Assistance is my pen so I stand
Reminiscing about the renaissance and
How I ran across the whole land
I picture myself holding pistols
Which I got from the holster next to what I piss through
So I’m holding a canister with a lit fuse
Containing liquid fluid that’ll cause mo’ than a bruise
A heckler and smith, my will is like Bruce
A bad man so I flick the spliff at ya shoes
Peek at you looking at the ash
Then laugh at your trash coup that is loose
Like a tipi I’ll leave your wig whammed
Is it a trick or am I damned?
Running through the forest and
My forearm is covered with four cuts and
My ears are buzzing and my head is bugging
Red dots on my jacket I guess I’m locked in
Damn it, is it my time to leave this planet?
They aiming for my chest like Janet
Ducked, they missed I hear them loading the next ten
Bullets in one case
Something in me tells me I gotta embrace
The fact that I lost.. Hell naah, I’m still in the race
So incase they loaded up another case
I dived into the river and
Climbed out after 7 miles shivering
Suddenly realizing I got hit right next to my liver, damn…
Blood coming out red oxygen effected the blueness
It seems time is ruthless like I’m useless
Bleeding to death leaving a trail of red splitting the water like a vampire river
Woke up after a while in an empire staring at the ceiling mirror
With no vision apparently I passed out..
Hieroglyphics on the wall like it’s the past now
Sun shining strong, did I pass south?
Stumbling towards the window with no glass, wow
Instead of cash I see people paying with gold
Is my mind playing or am I really in Egypt far from the cold?
Maybe a delusion caused by an Indian arrow
A bellydancer came in and said ‘what I can do for you ooh mighty pharaoh?’
I replied ‘pharaoh?’
My reflection in the mirror proved her statement to be fair, yo…
To be continued in the next papyrus scroll
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Re: Crossing Time

Postby gutawafang » Oct 22nd, '09, 09:54

HAHAHA. Nice.

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Re: Crossing Time

Postby mcZu » Oct 22nd, '09, 11:07

gutawafang wrote:HAHAHA. Nice.

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Thank you Guta, appreciate it, man. :b:
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Re: Crossing Time

Postby eminemgirl1234 » Oct 22nd, '09, 16:19

gutawafang wrote:HAHAHA. Nice.

Fave line: Bleeding to death leaving a trail of red splitting the water like a vampire river


Mine's too. Genius line! :y: :worship:
"Sometimes I feel so alone,
I just don't know, feels like I been down this road before.
So lonely and cold, it's like something takes over me,
soon as I go home and close the door.
Kinda feels like Déjà Vu, I wanna get away from this place I do,
but I can't and I wont say I tried but I know that's a lie cuz I don't,
and why I just don't know...

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Re: Crossing Time

Postby shabbymind » Oct 22nd, '09, 18:35

eminemgirl1234 wrote:
gutawafang wrote:HAHAHA. Nice.

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Mine's too. Genius line! :y: :worship:



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Re: Crossing Time

Postby mcZu » Oct 23rd, '09, 01:03

Thanks Guta and Eminemgirl, appreciate it.
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