Mind Of A Rapper

[Emadyville]

I had a concept for a song called "Mind of a rapper" and I decided to take it slightly further. I thought it might interest my friends who like my music, and some of which read my verses I write, hear me spit it to a beat, etc. So I wrote this on a blog and thought I'd share it, the portion of the verse itself, if feeded would be appreciated, but also the writing. I'd like to know if you like the idea of what I'm doing, if I should continue to do so, and if it was interesting, just a good read, boring, or whatever.

All feed is greatly appreciated

http://www.mindofarapper.blogspot.com/

[gutawafang]

Quote: It’s become outrageous it’s like a plague-is, contagious I’m lit but the pages flame less, heinous-when fingers print in latent’s, dangerous-what I do with my cadence, range is-nothing short of spacious, I came with-everything so blame this, latest-on my own patience, cause fame is whack if I am not the greatest…

Multis and internal rhymes. I see potential fire. Good vocab.

[Emadyville]

Quote: It’s become outrageous it’s like a plague-is, contagious I’m lit but the pages flame less, heinous-when fingers print in latent’s, dangerous-what I do with my cadence, range is-nothing short of spacious, I came with-everything so blame this, latest-on my own patience, cause fame is whack if I am not the greatest…

Multis and internal rhymes. I see potential fire. Good vocab.

thank you for the feed

[DƎRDYPK]

I liked that
very nice piece you put together
keep up the work

[Emadyville]

I liked that
very nice piece you put together
keep up the work

thank you

[mcZu]

I enjoyed reading it. The rhyme scheme is dope. You're keeping the same rhyme yet keeping the flow fresh, concept is dope too. Lyrically it's nice. Finish it (if you haven't already).

[classthe_king]

Really liked this man. Ill be checkin for a finished version, rhymes were crazy