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Sublime

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Sublime

Postby paulmichael89 » Oct 23rd, '09, 23:00

Sublime

Life's like footsteps pressed in fresh snow
Where the trail is lost
Soon as those winds of change blow
So slow down
Where can you be heading
You can't remember where you've been
Slow down
If you're in search of salvation
It's located in your head

Cut the chord, Jump aboard
Learn to laugh, Learn your math
Trying drugs, Finding love
Pass the grade, Graduate
Mom and Dad, Jobs and debt
Exchange the ring, The A.M. feed
Passing knowledge, Planning college
Crisis, Retire
Rewind, Expire

Now as one
Now as many
Burn your boots
Burn your aprons
Grasp this moment
It escapes ya
Here's your chance
Now's the time
Realize
The heart is...
The mind is...
Sublime

When the shooting stars are reached
When your ladder is complete
Wont you return to me?
A world full of questions
A world of beliefs
Some pass on the answers
And live it care free
Some live it to chance it
And pass up a guarantee
Which one will you be?
Which one will you be?

Now as one
Now as many
Burn your boots
Burn your aprons
Grasp this moment
It escapes ya
Here's your chance
Now's the time
Realize
Friendship is...
Family is...
Sublime

Rehearse the divine
From serpents to wine
Just searching to find
What's buried inside

Cut the chord, Jump aboard
Learn to laugh, Learn your math
Trying drugs, Finding love
Pass the grade, Graduate
Mom and Dad, Jobs and debt
Exchange the ring, The A.M. feed
Passing knowledge, Planning college
Crisis, Retire
Rewind, Expire

Now as one
Now as many
Burn your boots
Burn your aprons
Grasp this moment
It escapes ya
Here's your chance
Now's the time
Realize
Love is...
Life is...
Sublime

Even the strongest vice
Can always lose its grip...
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Re: Sublime

Postby Just Silver » Oct 24th, '09, 01:44

sorta nice to see something different more of a rock song approach written well but kinda weird structure
spottin' :y: :8)
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