Boomerang (Feed Please)

[classthe_king]

I was working on my wordplay and punches on this. Let me know what was good and what was bad so i know what to do in the future.


You talking shit but everything you said was babble
An impressive breed, so mess with me and ill put heads in gravel
I bled in battle, and led the calvary just to create panic
Cause you will see that I kill beats like the great famine
You ain’t planning to deal with this, you afraid to find us
Caue my verse fucks wit you mentally like it was made in china
I hate the kinda fakers, Im Abe cause it’s the truth I spill
But im also John Wilx cause when Im in booth I kill
Ive proved my skills; I don’t need to do any back flips jeez
Too many kids on the track, I guess im the catholic priest
Leave all wack deceased, battle me? I left the last one smoked
You getting close to beatin me, a bunch of rappin asymptotes
My wraths provoked, shit, ill battle him if he wants ta
I got the game on lock like im some kinda sea monster
We haunt ya, if your team is back for the demon rap im the provider
Spooking you on the track, you’d swear I gotta ghost writer

[gutawafang]

Flow was okay. Vocab is good.

[mcZu]

Flow was nice, punches were dope, good and meh. Overall it's not bad, keep it up.

[classthe_king]

Thanks again This was just a verse where im trying to work on my punches, so i wasn't really focusing on the flow or really anything else that much tbh. Appreciate the feed though.