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lil piece i wrote.

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lil piece i wrote.

Postby J Roc » Oct 24th, '09, 16:48

it's more poetry then rap. i think? read it anyways ... :staticsmoking:


Smart, Such an excellent student.
Who would sit back dispatched but never was stupid.
Ahead of his blueprint's everyday everybody in every way checked out his new print's.
Before he wrote he mentally drew it, pages & pages that was ready for fusion.
Such a mind he had, it's kinda sad people Rendered him useless.
Sentenced a nuisance until he realized with real eyes he was normal,
and he was ready to prove it. Did i Mention he'd do it?
So he took some Medical lude hit's.
Then turned schizophrenic, and all these Gentlemen knew it.
Now these were some kid's not too Big on ethic's,
That Was tired of being an underachiever, And wanted to get attention
Getting Dizzy Headed, Couldn't sit down and think a second.
They wanted his work, as counterfeit, he was so out of it & dizzed he let them.
Now everything he ever done start's to get pathetic.
He turned to a boy, with a secret to tell.
but he has no friends, cause he Keep's to him self.
Said "I'm Ready" Eyes Heavy He's Sleepy As Hell
Just because he had time, don't mean he'd excel.
He's About to get expired, he's Getting Tired i don't Think He's Snoring.
Victim of everyone who thinks he's boring, he's Suffering from rigamortis.
He Phoned, It Would Ring but only Get Recording's.
It was in the morning, every ones asleep who he thinks ignoring.
Everything get's dim & boring... because nobody could listen for him.
people come to give the mourning. because they couldn't be there in the morning..


Creative writing .. i guess :whistle:
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Re: lil piece i wrote.

Postby Solace » Oct 25th, '09, 18:39

Damnn I really liked this one. Shit was dope...liked the story...Flow and multies were dope.
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