Spyder vs lilwayne4Life(Spyder Won)

[Spyder]

16 lines first to 5 no k-o, no flips

Listen “baby”, you rap a disaster I overshadow-you
Im not mad-at-you, just got dumb myself down to battle-you
Vocals ‘impale-her’, I got shit “easy-tonight” you lack-status
Use your ‘inhaler’ to be “weezy-on-the-mic” like an asthmatic.
Eatin the mic, throw it ‘back-at-him’ because I slew-fiends
Bust ‘acronyms’ of real rap in your face like Wu’s-C.R.E.A.M
Choose-teams, you playin for Slim Shady or for Wayne
Either way im battlin you and fuckin don’t remember your name
You cant contend with my game, you cant reason-with-me
I’m odd so your wanna be black ass cant get even-with-me.
Spit lyrics like no other to leave you smothered and punctured
All of Jay’s Blueprints wouldn’t get you ass some structure.
I took all of ‘spitterville’ made that shit sit the fuck-still
Until, I spit turned em upside down til theirs head was blood-fill.
You don’t impress anyone you ‘genies’ im not even upset-yet
Spellin wrong backin a 'fenominal' rapper and to stupid to get-it.

says his location is Spitterville lol... line 13
he was backin wayne for sayin F for phenominal, and said i clame to be a rap 'genies'
but ironcally cant spell it after backin his man...line 15,16

[Wic Kid]

Where is he? Did he maybe...



-ed out?

[LilWayne4Life]

Fuck a 16 bar i do it my way

Im ridiculous, hard to discuss
so dirty Mr. clean cant even spit shine this rust
Put the pistol to your brain, squeeze the trigga
White kid from Canada acting like SHHhhhhh (ni9ga)
Back to my message, back in session
outlining spyder's body in white chalk is todays class lesson
put the chalk to spidy's dome and begin to question
if the red ploom of smoke is a good investment
spyder your tongue twisted, you musta missed it
the thesaurus is online if you wanna visit it
you talk like your from the Projects
but I bet your a high tech white kid doing projects for college
Im son of sam delirious, tear you apart like opponents vs. serius
Because Im so serious, leaving people curious
as to what made this cat so furious
Ill be honest it starts in my mental
Then it goes down synapses’ and then through my dentals
Then Ill rip a track, lay heat on an instrumental
Making spyder second guess his hip hop credentials
Listen I know you’re good at what you do
You spit till ya lungs are blue through and through
But you’re going against a seasoned pro, with a flow
that contains katrina force winds that blow
You talk slow about Brooklyn’s white snow
Ill talk about fully converted auto AK’s that glow
so lets prep your vien, begin the campaign
to inject real lyrics as raw cocaine
cause Im leavin Spyder's brain full of pain
drowning him with hallucinations and mental strains
It is not luck my skill is unreal, I contain mass appeal,
That will leave your wounds from this battle hard to heal
Cuz "You can be alot better" this site says
I know that comment ruined your night going straight to ya head
So you switched flow, with a finer thread
But to think you can win against me you must be mad misled
Because I can go for days, spitting under sun rays on Sunday
setting paper ablaze with my pen just to amaze
And that is the difference between me and a fake
It’s natural, if I don’t write my hand begins to shake
Vowels that tremor, making your body quake
Vocal going in your ears Poyder, making your brain ache
I guess you can say I’m a walking time bomb
Approaching you with a pen as a detonator in my palm.
And the explosion will resonate and employ white noise that annoys and destroys
So spiderman its time to separate the men from the boys..

[gutawafang]

I vote Spyder.

[Logann]

very close sustaining from voting

[Wic Kid]

Not hatin on wayne4life, but too basic rhymes and it looks like u tryed to sound gangsta.

I vote Spyder.

[LilWayne4Life]

Not hatin on wayne4life, but too basic rhymes and it looks like u tryed to sound gangsta.

I vote Spyder.

My rhymes are basic? Oh okay , i bet if i posted the same lyrics with a different username you would vote otherwise

[Wic Kid]

Not hatin on wayne4life, but too basic rhymes and it looks like u tryed to sound gangsta.

I vote Spyder.

My rhymes are basic? Oh okay , i bet if i posted the same lyrics with a different username you would vote otherwise

Dude, its pretty obvious that you didnt write this shit for this particular battle. Its some of your old texts, just slightly changed to make it seem like you wrote it for Spyder.

[Logann]

Spyders lines were a lot more personal about f4l but he had some more impressive lines- I wouldnt call them basic. Just more general at anyone than a hit at spyder.

[LilWayne4Life]

Not hatin on wayne4life, but too basic rhymes and it looks like u tryed to sound gangsta.

I vote Spyder.

My rhymes are basic? Oh okay , i bet if i posted the same lyrics with a different username you would vote otherwise

Dude, its pretty obvious that you didnt write this shit for this particular battle. Its some of your old texts, just slightly changed to make it seem like you wrote it for Spyder.

What the fuck? it took me 30 mins to do that verse. stop hating all your life damn.

[Solace]

EDIT: Edited to better explain.

I'm voting Spyder. It was a LOT better in just 16 lines where as yours had to be exceeding 16 lines and still didn't match up. Your lines were beginner in terms of multies, flow, internal rhymes, punches, personals and nameplay. Yes, all of them imo. I don't need to explain those though, most people that read it who knows what those terms are will be able to see. And his internals were multi-syllable too which made them a lot better too. Thought I definitely can't say that yours was wack. And I won't because that's a lie. I expected total crap from you and you came...decently. But not as good as Spyder. Keep at it, both of you.

[Emadyville]

Not hatin on wayne4life, but too basic rhymes and it looks like u tryed to sound gangsta.

I vote Spyder.

My rhymes are basic? Oh okay , i bet if i posted the same lyrics with a different username you would vote otherwise

no it was basic, but had you been basic and clever it would have been decent, but since you simply used basic rhymes it's not that great

[Slim Zaddy]

vote to spyder his was much better,, and as scotty said , it's 16 lines, nad you wrote maybe up to 40 ,, i dont know ,, so spyder got that one ,,,,,,,

[LilWayne4Life]

People here let me just say this

suck a dick, who the fuck says he has to make the rules? he didn't even PM me and tell me what i would like to do this isn't no real battle 95% of you are hoping on his dick just because ya'll are hating on me since day one, let's take this to a lil wayne froum battle and see the results. imout

[SajN]

http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/viewto ... 1&start=10

Im ridiculous, hard to discuss
so dirty Mr. clean cant even spit shine this rust
Put the pistol to your brain, squeeze the trigga
White kid from Houston, TX acting like SHHhhhhh (nigga)
Back to my message, back in session
outlining trill's body in white chalk is todays class lesson
put the chalk to trill's dome and begin to question
if the red ploom of smoke is a good investment
trillphill you tongue twisted, you musta missed it
the thesaurus is online if you wanna visit it
YOu talk like your from the Projects
but I bet your a high tech white kid doing projects for college
Im son of sam delirious, tear you apart like opponents vs. serius
Because Im so serious, leaving people curious
as to what made this cat so furious
Ill be honest it starts in my mental
Then it goes down synapses’ and then through my dentals
Then Ill rip a track, lay heat on an instrumental
Making trillphill second guess his hip hop credentials
Listen I know you’re good at what you do
You spit till ya lungs are blue through and through
But you’re going against a seasoned pro, with a flow
that contains katrina force winds that blow
You talk slow about Brooklyn’s white snow
Ill talk about fully converted auto AK’s that glow
so lets prep your vien, begin the campaign
to inject real lyrics as raw cocaine
cause Im leavin trill's brain full of pain
drowning him with hallucinations and mental strains
It is not luck my skill is unreal, I contain mass appeal,
That will leave your wounds from this battle hard to heal
Cuz "You can be alot better" this site says
I know that comment ruined your night going straight to ya head
So you switched flow, with a finer thread
But to think you can win against me you must be mad misled
Because I can go for days, spitting under sun rays on Sunday
setting paper ablaze with my pen just to amaze
And that is the difference between me and a fake
It’s natural, if I don’t write my hand begins to shake
Vowels that tremor, making your body quake
Vocal going in your ears trill, making your brain ache
I guess you can say I’m a walking time bomb
Approaching you with a pen as a detonator in my palm.
And the explosion will resonate and employ white noise that annoys and destroys
So trillphill its time to separate the men from the boys..