My Life ( Mixed By C-Riz )

[Slim Zaddy]

Anther song done by me,,,,,
it's about some shit on my life,
it's mixed, by C-Riz,, so big thanks to you homie ,,

Feedback is appreciated yo,,, all feeds will be returned



http://www.zshare.net/audio/6759832261ecef94/

[Big Proof 4ever]

i see u can flow man,but still it needs alot practise,i can barely hear the beat all i hear is ur voice,delivery needs work aswell,i feel that u were trying not to sound bored tried to put emotions but still sounds boring,and man dont use shit like "broken dreams"its hella corny,give urself some time to write rly good rhyme no need to rush and shit keep working i think u can spit and believe me practise makes magic

[Slim Zaddy]

i see u can flow man,but still it needs alot practise,i can barely hear the beat all i hear is ur voice,delivery needs work aswell,i feel that u were trying not to sound bored tried to put emotions but still sounds boring,and man dont use shit like "broken dreams"its hella corny,give urself some time to write rly good rhyme no need to rush and shit keep working i think u can spit and believe me practise makes magic

aight ,,,,,,,,,,,, thanks for the feed man,, but i feel that delivery here is good man,,,,,, maybe you right about , rush ,, and shit,, cuz i wrote it yesterday ,, and recording it today ,, in 10 min,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,, anyway ,, thank again for the feed ,,,,,,,,,, cheers