Im Pissed Off!

[lilrossy]

pissed off like a shit stain in a toilet bowl,
ya'll fools gold fuckin faggots beta jus fold,
dis da real shit, aint down wiv it, get enrolled,
when u write my name, make sure those letters are bold,
uppercased and underlined, dis game is mine,
its thunder time, a storms cummin, run and hide,
dangerous and unkind, im in the wrong state of mind,
me bein equiped wiv a mic is like havin a gun to fire,
i spit shots and rock spots, i dont giv a fuck,
when shit stops i get props, dis kid dont suck,
ima mean young buck, but a renowned kinda guy,
but that can meen 2 different things, like a brown eye,
yeah i found christ, and i flipped him the fuckin bird,
thanx for this life, he said go to hell and fuckin burn,
wat was that, naah fuck that, thats it, uurrr dead,
took off his sandals and paddled his fuckin forehead.

[Solace]

Was iight...Very simple, only lines I actually liked here were:

when u write my name, make sure those letters are bold,
uppercased and underlined, dis game is mine,

But other than that this was pretty blah. You've written way better before.

Ending was pretty funny tho. Keep at it.

[lilrossy]

aight kewl, thanx for the feedbak man.

[macdaddy019967]

my answer to you is get laid and it should help out you being pissed off

[lilrossy]

that was a good one.

[gutawafang]

It's good man.

pissed off like a shit stain in a toilet bowl,
ya'll fools gold fuckin faggots beta jus fold,
dis da real shit, aint down wiv it, get enrolled,
when u write my name, make sure those letters are bold,
uppercased and underlined, dis game is mine,
its thunder time, a storms cummin, run and hide,

the rest was not that good man. prolly not my cup of tea that's all. no offense. but that part i quoted is nice.

[eminemgirl1234]

Daaaaaamn! Whooo! Show these wack fuckers who's the shit! Yeah!

[D'Leh]

Simple but funny shit! great piece homie!

[lilrossy]

Simple but funny shit! great piece homie!

thanx

Daaaaaamn! Whooo! Show these wack fuckers who's the shit! Yeah!

haha, thanx.
and i will continue too.

It's good man.

pissed off like a shit stain in a toilet bowl,
ya'll fools gold fuckin faggots beta jus fold,
dis da real shit, aint down wiv it, get enrolled,
when u write my name, make sure those letters are bold,
uppercased and underlined, dis game is mine,
its thunder time, a storms cummin, run and hide,

the rest was not that good man. prolly not my cup of tea that's all. no offense. but that part i quoted is nice.

Aight, kewl man, thanx for the feedbak.

[Yah-hah]

Yeah man like they said kinda basic but I laughed a couple times. Good stuff though homie

[lilrossy]

thanx man, appreciate it.

[eminemgirl1234]

Are you Eminem?

[lilrossy]

umm... no

[eminemgirl1234]

you sure?

[lilrossy]

okay u got me, i've been exposed.
but dont tell anyone.