Open End

[mcZu]

A story 'bout Sarah T.Nems (which is an angram for 'harassment') and her ex Vic C.Ton (which is an anagram for 'convict'), called 'Open End'.


More than meets the eye in this era like Mims
A story ‘bout Sarah T. Nems
Sarah used to clean up Carrera GT rims
To pay an operation for Farah’s limbs
Who got injured in an accident
Farah is Sarah’s big sister who’s innocent
But the whole act was far from innocent
That act left Farah’s future in the cement
So to be decent Vic gave her a job
Vic C. Ton works at the Fur pub
Sure it was nice job until Vic got drunk
And until Sarah found out what Vic had in his trunk
It stunk, so Sarah had to take a look
She didn’t know she was facing a crook
How could her ex be a murderer?
She sprung behind some old furniture
‘cause she heard Vic entering the Fur’s garage
The first thing Vic did was laugh
‘cause it was still open, the trunk lid
Vic was a bit drunk, he dropped his cig lit
Which fell straight into the liquid
The garage caught flame like an old barn
Sarah had to come out though she was armed
Afraid of her drunk ex’s force
Help? Something she couldn’t ask for
Vic had no other option than to extort
She had to sleep with her ex enforced
Otherwise her job will hit an end of course
Without condoms ‘cause Vic wanted more to it
Sarah couldn’t make Vic forfeit
She got pregnant, Vic said she gotta abort it
No choice or option to shift
So she contemplated suicide shit...
She couldn’t sue Vic aside of what she saw
There was no evidence of a corpse so no law
Could protect Sarah, it was damn evident
That Sarah would be better when
She get the privilege to enter heaven, damn
She felt like a bird with her feathers bend
No father nor brother to ask for a helping hand
Her mother lived in another state
Farah couldn’t do a thing in her current state
So Sarah figured out that her life’s insurance
Will be enough for Farah’s surgery and since
What she fought for got solved in an instance
She wrote a letter to Farah in minutes and
Sarah left it on top of the TV stand
She then prayed for the last time she thought
Grabbed the gun and aimed at her thoughts
Pulling the trigger was harder than she thought....

[Fa-Q]

Good story telling.....I liked it good flow and story telling is always hard so goodjob for that

[mcZu]

i really liked the story, good flow, could tell it was to a beat, nice ideas and good imagery, only complaint is the anagram thing lol still nice man, keep it up

Thanks ColeMeister, appreciate it. And the anagrams fit the story, the whole sotry is based on them

Good story telling.....I liked it good flow and story telling is always hard so goodjob for that

Thanks Ef Ay Queeee, appreciate it man.

[Fa-Q]

Good story telling.....I liked it good flow and story telling is always hard so goodjob for that

Thanks Ef Ay Queeee, appreciate it man.

Lol I used to write it Eff-eh-cue lol but then its spelled like its written out

[mcZu]

Good story telling.....I liked it good flow and story telling is always hard so goodjob for that

Thanks Ef Ay Queeee, appreciate it man.

Lol I used to write it Eff-eh-cue lol but then its spelled like its written out

Haha, yeah.